Beyond - Comments

Wow, this is amazing... seriously, these are so intriguing and get the read hooked so easily. John is insane there's no doubting it. Poor Eden... and that ending... wow that was unexpected! Great Great Great... now onto the next part... so excited :)

EDEN'S DEAD?

I cry.

I'm glad that there's a sequel! I want to know what happens to John.

DUN DUN DUNNN. I am loving this and I am just getting sucked into this story. Moving onto the next part!

That was intense. I liked it. I'm going to check out the next part.

This chapter was suspenseful!!! I loved it!!!

This just keeps getting better and better with each chapter. I really do love this update. This is amazing.

I'm eager to know what they meant by Eden being a part of something bigger here.

I really hope these detectives know what they're in for, because there in no backing out now.
Good update.

Not Devon!

Eden, I have one thing to say to you. RUUUUUUUUUUUUN.

Oh my goodness, Eden!!!! I hope you have a plan...

Oh, I love the update.

Oh no, not the good doctor!! (What type of doctor was he?) John, you're so terrible, I hate you! And now Eden better watch out because you're coming for her!!!!

This has been the longest chapter you've written so far! I wonder what's going to happen next.

I love the update. I think this is amazing. It would be pretty cool if you turned into a trilogy.

What the heck is wrong with her??? End all contact with that weirdo and run for the hills. She seriously needs to get her priorities straight. It's good that those detectives are on her case now. Hopefully John will be caught.

I'm way over my head right now. I LIKE DEVON HUHU.

Will Devon escape? Fight him back or will Eden come to the rescue? This is so mind-boggling.

I'M SO FREAKING EXCITED TO SEE WHAT WOULD HAPPEN TO EDEN AND JOHN.

LITERALLY, IDK WHAT TO DO WITH MY LIFE. Now that there are two detectives, I have a feeling things are going to go way downhill.

Oh no, Eden!!! Please stay away from him, you know he is nothing but trouble!

OH WOW DAMN. This story is getting more and more intense and I'm absolutely loving it! Devon is a sweetheart and John is a massive creep, but I can't help but admire/pity him... the way you write his character makes him also have a human aspect and vulnerabilities. You're truly an amazing writer, and I'm hoping for the next chapter to come out soon!

Wait! Why did she call him? Oh nooooo.