Beyond - Comments

This was really good!!! Why would she call him though? I guess she couldn't live afraid any longer and decided to face him. I'm not surprised that she keep this number on her phone though...
Please update soon!!!

This just keeps on getting better and better. I how do you keep on doing this so well.

I love how the chapter title word has the word in the story. That is super cool. Good update btw, I love how he is stalking her and she doesn't even know it.

Devon is so sweeeeet!

Awwwww, that is super sweet! I love that he is willing to sacrifice himself for Eden! I hope he lives long enough though!

I felt bad for John here. HUHUHU NO JOOOHN. WHY WOULD SOPHIA LEAVE YOU.

Oh my gosh, that was intense. I can't belive he would kill someone so close to him. He really is sick.

That was intense. I can't wait for more.

I think it would be interesting to see John's first kill. Great update, by the way.

I thought that was interesting. Very good chapter. I still think there should be a POV at the start of each chapter though.
I would love if there was a chapter about John's first kill. That would be very interesting.

I'm starting to get confused now... Who's killing who? I thought John saw Daniel, I didn't know it was Eden who saw Daniel.

I sense heavy action scenes ahead!

Creepy that Eden is now getting visits from Daniel.

Oh, sweet lord! Is Eden going to kill John? Don't answer that! I'm seriously in love with this story. It's amazing.

Daniel?!

Ugh, I hope to see another update soon because the recent one was absolutely awesome! I loved how Daniel asked John a question about Eden that John couldn't answer.

I really feel like John is infatuated with Eden just enough to kind of love her in this sad sick way. I mean, I know he knows where she is by now, so why hasn't he killed her? Just a thought. lol, it's probably way out of left field though.

I'm not surprised that John is now being haunted by past people he has killed, especially Daniel. But I liked how you added that. I'm looking forward to the action filled chapters where John and Eden meet again!

I seriously can't wait for more. It just keeps getting better and better. Oh, I love how he is being haunted by his memories.

I agree with the past 2 commenters. This story is getting intense and I love it!

This story is super intense. Each chapter was all fast-paced and mind-blowing! I can't wait to read more!