It was so adorable that he had already bought the seat next to him I'm glad she decided to go with him! I'm sure they're going to have a wonderful time.
I mean how could you not go after he charms you like that! They are just aweet and innocent together it makes for such a good read. I'm excited for things to get more serious as well and I'm glad that Everly's is taking chances
AHHHH I'm dying. I seriously love them, they're so adorable. I can't wait for them to go to California, and continue their journey. He's so sweet to her, I was grinning the entire time I read this chapter. Please update soon!
It was a surprise, because he'd been talking about the trips to California like they were an "eventually," not a "right now." Jeez! I don't even know how I'd wrap my mind around that. I know she wants to keep the peace in her home, but I really hope she visits him in Cali...mostly so that they don't have to be apart for too long. I love them together. <3
Hey, you did an awesome job with this chapter. I think I can definitely agree with Everly that this happened way unexpectedly and I'm glad it did. As soon as I have time away from school I will definitely start reading your new story!
You write wonderfully. This is such a steady pace, and I couldn't stop myself from pressing on to the next chapter. I really like how you've got the characters all set up; her family, Wyatt. I also like that you didn't make him abusive, that's so overused and you didn't go there. It's refreshing.
Their relationship is forming so solidly... That's an awkward way to say it... It's just so easy to read.
I've only read up to chapter 10, and I'm sure the rest of it's great, but it just doesn't push me to want to continue to read it. That's nothing against your writing, or the story, I just don't connect with it, y'know?