Because Twelve Days Wasn't Long Enough - Comments

@ raven_k
I know I haven't updated in a LONGGG time but I've had part of the next chapter written for a while. I work 30 hours a week and go to school full time so it's hard for me to find time to post nowadays, but I'll try to get something up soon!

is this story still active?

Great story, I loved every part! Is there more to come? Or is it over?

@ What_a_catch_lauren
I don't think anyone was! I wasn't, haha. All of a sudden one day I thought of this, and I thought it'd be perfect because it's so different!

@ sodapop curtis
I don't know what to expect either It all writes itself! We'll have to see!!! I don't think she wants to have a baby yet, anyway, so we're in the clear ;)

@ lady_enygma
The conversation with Bronx was my favorite part, omg. And obvi I had to make Pete understanding, but I think it's a testament to his love for her that he didn't freak out or say, "Well what the hell will we do now." I dunno. I couldn't really picture it going any other way, lol.

@ Stumpslumps01
I love that you thought of the attraction to Patrick, because after writing that part that's how I felt too! I think she just has a platonic love for him, because he's Pete's best friend, and because she's gotten to know him well after spending a lot of time with him in LA and Chicago. But i think it's really funny that you thought that too!

@ birds ate my face
Eek thank youuuu

I really do love this! I first thought she was pregnant, but I was not expecting that. Cannot wait for the next chapter

ahhh Fall Out Boy is back together and Pete and Marsha are perfect as always and Patrick is adorable!! But you're making me anxious, I don't know what to expect with this curveball...my first thought is that maybe she's pregnant. DON'T TELL ME

aw bless, that phone conversation with Bronx. And I'm glad she was able to tell Pete and that he was supportive and understanding

I really love this story. You convey the emotions so well! Did I detect a hint of attraction to patrick though? :)

It didn't suck, it was perfect and sweet

@ What_a_catch_lauren
They're not breaking up don't worry!!!

@ lady_enygma
I know, and she's trying so hard to enjoy it but the weather is really bringing her down and she's just sad and awww

@ birds ate my face
I won't disclose whether or not she's pregnant, but it has to do with babies!

They cannot break up! I love them

I want to hug her. She wants to go home so bad and I want to hug her

Oh Lordy, is she pregnant? I feel it. I hope she isn't, it doesn't feel right, but if she is...hopefully they'll be happy

@ What_a_catch_lauren
Yes! I'm currently working on one! I'd say it's about halfway done, but I won't be able to post until Monday night probably because I'm seeig Fall Out Boy Sunday night then I'm working all day Monday. But yes, one will be out soon!!

Will there be another update? :)

Oh man I hope all goes well, I always get nervous whenever they're doing something nice because I'm afraid it'll turn into a mess later

Ahh yay an update! Everyone's updating tonight, jeez, now I feel pressured to hurry up and update as well haha.

I love sweet moments like that between Pete and Marsha, they always remind me of when they first got together and how carefree they both were and how all they wanted to do was be with each other. I'm so excited for them to start building a life together :')

@ What_a_catch_lauren
There will be!!! I hope I can update before I leave for vacation on Tuesday! Thanks for reading though, I'm so glad people like this!

I hope there is going to be more

I love this!!!