Because Twelve Days Wasn't Long Enough - Comments

Oh my god hahaha before I even made it to the author's note, I started typing out, "Yesss I love the lyric dropping." Good to know we're on the same page here.

Don't apologize for the dialogue! Your interactions are always realistic and match the mood you're setting. Sometimes I like a line so much that I read it over like five times and just sit back like, "Shit. That was so good." (I had that reaction with "It's pretty easy when you don't have a heart anymore" and "Yeah, I don't know what you want to do, either.") Just, damn. Pete and Marsha's conversations always hit me hard.

He doesn't deserve her just yet, she needs to make him suffer especially if he's with someone because Marsha doesn't want him yet. I say she should slap him and ignore him for a bit, see how he likes it

oh this is just perfection, i cant wait to read this!

Already posted the first chapter? Damn you're on FIYA homie

I'm soooo in love with New Marsha (I'm just a sucker for feisty, cold-hearted female characters, what can I say) and I hope she doesn't give in to Pete too easily because dude the backwards way he went about things was fucked up. I'm glad he's starting to realize that it wasn't fair to Marsha and I really hope he manages to prove his worthiness to her again (of course not without suffering a bit first.)

Also I'm interested in how their relationship is going to be repaired with the new girl in the picture. Knowing Pete, it's definitely gonna get more complicated than just "I'll tell her we're aren't a thing."

And what about that title drop in the ending? So good. It made it so dramatic, gahhh I need more!

@ birds ate my face
I think that's an excellent idea!

I want Marsha to slap him