I really liked this chapter. I like that Zacky wants to go to the Nutcracker, that he just found the ticket in the paper airplane, and Gatsby! My friend made me read the book before the movie came out, and I really enjoyed it. =)
Pretty interesting so far. Although, I'm curious, did you mean for that last chapter to mostly be italicized? I'm assuming part of the coding got screwed up, which I think happens to everyone. Hell, I tell myself to double check my coding and it still happens pretty much every other time.
@ Total Nightmare Thank you! I'm glad you've decided to read this little story (and leaving a comment always makes my day) Hope you stick around for the long haul! xo
I'm loving this so far! The group's dynamic is awesome, and you managed to portray them all as super friendly and nice people. I also love the fact that Quinn is a ballet dancer! That got my full attention right from the start :3 And they held hands by the end! I'm really excited for the next chapter. Please update soon :)
@ Haylie Jaed Haha. It really is a bit of a filler though. I've got to cover some time without making the story drag oooon, you know? As always, thanks for reading a commenting, dear :)
Ooh, Halloween is always fun. XD And yay, they're hanging out! And holding hands. Ooh la la!
A bit of a filler - but also not. Showing the progression of their relationship. ^_^ I liked it. And I'm sorry this comment is short, but I'm a little all over the place this morning.
@ Haylie Jaed I love reading your comments :) I'm trying my best to include "real life" - but, of course, as it is fiction soon it will take on more of my own imagination, hehe. As always, thanks for reading dear.
Well, should have seen this coming - Zacky's already involved in a fight, and already nearly landed himself in detention. =P Typical.
And yay, Brian for a friend! I'm guessing those are the Berry twins that just joined them. I am so okay with this. XD I really like that you included Cam, too. I always love seeing more than just the band in these stories.
@ Haylie Jaed Ah! Hooray for subscribing! Better late than never, 'ey? Ballet is something that I wish I would have stuck with (funny the things we take for granted when we were younger)
@ cciara19 Not a bad idea! I love that movie as well. Not gonna lie... a little bit of an influence when deciding to write this story (minus the whole going crazy drama)