The Enigma’s Anomaly - Comments

I really like this though! Super unique, and very well written.

I really like this though! Super unique, and very well written.

My first thought after I saw the "Don't Wanna Give Anything Away But..." chapter title was "This is a chapter title, not a Fall Out Boy song."

I was away so got to binge on the last few chapters, and ngl, I'm really going to miss seeing an email every few days saying this has been updated because I have enjoyed this so so much! Thank you for giving me such enjoyment in reading!

;_; it is done. thank you for this beautiful story. I'm reading SH..M? too :3 noth of these stories are amazing so yeah... t's clever and well written so congrats! you finally finished it too!

I read the last three chapters together, and wow, this was just perfect. I enjoyed this story so much from beginning to end, and there wasn't one line that I didn't love. You wrote this with brilliance that very few people will ever be able to match. Your writing was magnificent, your dialogue was second to none, and the pop culture references just made this even better.

In terms of character developments, I thoroughly enjoyed Frank's journey from assassin to a man who finds his forgotten humanity when he falls in love. It was done in such a realistic way, and never once did I think it was implausible that he could change - it was a natural progression, and his fundamental personality didn't change. He's a survivor by nature, and his sarcasm and wit made this story amazing.

Gerard was just adorable. So creative, open and accepting, and his need to protect those around him is admirable. He fitted Frank so well, not in a 'they're opposites' way, but just in a 'they were made for each other' way. They're so similar, and so freaking stubborn which made many tense moments where I almost shouted at my screen.

Mikey was just awesome, and Banks was such an amazing villain. He reminded me of an old style, Bond-like, villain. There wasn't a shred of anything redeemable about him, so I was just rooting for him to be shot in the end.

This was just such a fantastic piece of work my dear, and I'm sad that it's finished! I really hope you write a bit more about Frank and Gerard one day!

You are my fcking queen.

Holy mother of hotdogs, this whole thing is just so perfect I want to absorb it into my brain, there is literally nothing about this that is not fantastic, I can't wait to read more from you but if this should turn out to be your main legacy, then its certainly a legacy to be proud of :) xo

oh my fucking gosh. He is dead! praise the damn lord! Yey and i love this story so much! lots have happened and in so much detail. I;m sad cause this is almost over :c can't wait for the side fic though! should be as awesome as this! The ice torture, damn that's gotta be painful. And thank god mikey found gerard and they got to frank in time! ahh this is so gooooo- no, amazing. perfect. xo

oh my fucking gosh. He is dead! praise the damn lord! Yey and i love this story so much! lots have happened and in so much detail. I;m sad cause this is almost over :c can't wait for the side fic though! should be as awesome as this! The ice torture, damn that's gotta be painful. And thank god mikey found gerard and they got to frank in time! ahh this is so gooooo- no, amazing. perfect. xo

Poor Frankie! You're so mean to him. Ice torture? Really? I know what it's like to get a body part dunked into ice, and it burns! Really badly! It's as bad as scalding water! Quite an ingenious method of torture I have to admit, kudos for originality.

I admire how Frank still isn't giving up, and still fighting for Gerard to the very end. Banks is just so yuck. He can't even keep his end of the deal - what a scumbag, and such a wonderfully hateful villain. This chapter, to me, shows exactly the kind of men Frank and Banks are. Frank may be a reformed killer, but he has a soul, a heart, and that makes him a far better man than Banks could ever hope to be. Banks, even when making a deal, can't find enough decency and self respect to stick by it. A man who can't stick to word when he thinks he's winning shows a lack of pride that you think a man of his stature would have. Such a subtly done contrast, but it's there and it makes me love Frank even more. I'm just waiting for someone to come to Frank's rescue!

Please, please update soon.

@ Lyra
I always love your comments because you give these nice long ones that make me even think about the way I chose to demonstrate the characters. Most of it I already know, but when you summarize it I realize just see what an impact it makes to the story, so yeah, keep leaving these, I love reading them.

Ugh, you're so mean. Seriously. I've been dying for this to be updated, and then you leave me with a cliffhanger. Not very nice.

Frank appealing to the men's more human side was interesting, and I thought it was a pretty good insight into what a person must go through if they're facing their death. Even if you think something isn't going to work, you have to try anyway just in case. Human survival kicking it at it's finest. I love how Frank just can't shut up, and even more so when he's in a life-or-death scenario (or in this case facing-your-demise scenario).

I loved the last line “No, I’ll keep my head up,”. because to me, it kinda sums up Frank's character. He keeps on moving, keeps on trying, doesn't give up. He doesn't lose that innate pride and self preservation that maybe some people would lose so close to the end.

Again, love the dialogue, and even though you left me with a cliffhanger *cue glare*, this was an enjoyable chapter. I hope you update soon...as in, right now...if you can. Please. (see, I even said it nicely)

I have absolutely no idea what's going to happen next but I love it! You're such a good writer and I can't wait to see this to the end!

I have absolutely no idea what's going to happen next but I love it! You're such a good writer and I can't wait to see this to the end!

This story is amazing, but damn this is going to be so painful!

WHUHSCJAEHNBKJRENF I LOVE YOU GOD DAMN I LOVE YOU SO MUCH THIS STORY IS LIFE

I mean poor Gerard, but Mikey can't seem to catch a break. Poor guy.

ASDFGHDUJNWrweuhfsrnrgbigsonf5g oMG OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! I"M ADDICTED TO THIS STORY IT IS BEYOND PERFECT OMG/ I AM COMPLETELY AND UTTERLY IN LOVE WITH YOUR WRITING> OMG> YOU"RE AMAZING YOU"RE GOD I LOVE YOU. FRANK IS AMAZING AND PERFECT AND FRICK I AM SO EXCITED THIS STORY MAKES ME SOOOOOO HAPPY IT"S UNBELIEVABLE. WHAAAA

Holy plot twist Batman!