Oh my gosh! I was definitely not expecting Gerard to put the pieces together. It's nice that he is so accepting and that he is going to be honest with Frank about his past. Also, yay for Mikey's freedom!
First you've got me going, @Best comment reply ever!@ and then you throw this chapter at us and I don't know how I'm supposed to feel about anything anymore!
I rarely comment on stories but holy cow this is bloody brilliant. You've got a fantastic plot that keeps everyone guessing, regular updates and your writing style is incredible. Definitely one of the best I've ever read on mibba. Really looking forward to reading the rest of this, I love it :)
Frank is not allowed to call Gerard a nerd when he had a dream about Mal Reynolds when he fainted. Also, it's can't be that degrading to faint, especially considering Mal. He was in a dress once! :)
Holy shit once the cops started to seem fishy I was wondering if mr-sadist-man had paid the cops to cooperate with him, I didnt think he was a cop himself! That was an awesome twist.
I kind of wish that Gerard is an assassin too or something really badass. Then if Frank was in a life or death situation then Gerard uses his assassin/spy skills to save him. But whateves, great chapter!
yo don't be sorry!! happy stuff is just as enjoyable as unhappy stuff!! i've been analysing texts all weekend for an exam i think that's the problem here haha, i'm looking forward to the next chapter :)