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This is really really phenomenal so far!

I'm a few chapters in and I'm starting to feel attached to the characters. What I think makes the story is the emotion that you've put in, and the way that you've written it so that it's not exactly extremely descriptive but it's easy to read and has enough information to make you visualise things and be able to hear what they are saying in your own head as you read.

You've done a great job of making the reader feel like they are a part of the story rather than just somebody looking down on what's happened. As I said, I've grown attached to the girl now and I hope she comes out okay. It's a long way but I'll bookmark and read through this bit by bit because it's an awesome piece of work!

I've never read a story about World War 2, and definitely had not expected to read one anytime soon, but I am in awe of this story and its beauty. Your writing, the characters, the descriptions, the way that you've hidden things and waited to reveal them, and the way you've given Six a voice but also stripped her of her identity until the very end when it's given back to her as an old woman. I just think this is one of those special stories that are so raw and beautiful, and I couldn't help but cry because it was so horribly and yet magnificently sad. You captured the era, the people, and the horror of it all so wonderfully and realistically. I've been meaning to comment for awhile, since I actually read this awhile ago but have just finally gotten the time! Anyway, fantastic work!!

I just have to start out by saying that I don't believe that I've ever read a story about this time period because, well, I haven't quite seem them that often on here, especially. I'm already preparing myself for a world of emotion that I know are within the story. I'm sure I'll be crying by the end of the novel, and I will tell you if I do.

I think what I liked about the first chapter was that in the middle of it, you stopped referring to her by her name and instead by her number. I thought that was quite interesting since it is what the old man said to her anyway. But I knew it, I'm already feeling really sad about this, especially the ending.

This story is now bookmarked on my computer and everything so I can read the rest when I get the chance. Like I said, I'm already expecting to cry by the end, either from sadness or happiness, whichever one comes first, I suppose.

Well after a hiatus from reading any story, I had to come back and finish. I have tears in my eyes haha. This was such a great OG story and I loved it from beginning to end. Bravo <3

It took me a while, but I'm finally getting around to your story here! I'm only a few chapters in, but I'm really liking what I'm seeing so far. :] There's a lot of tension at the beginning and I think you've built it up nicely. It's hard to read about how these things took place in history, but I'm just so curious about how this thing between Wolfgang and Six is going to blossom. I think you've completed this story, so I look forward to reading it to the end!

For some reason I never got the notification that it was updated, but I'm glad I checked my subs now.

Oh my God, I can't believe it's over, it's been a long, emotional and strong journey and story to read. I've enjoyed every chapter, and I really, really liked this one, we finally learned Six's name! I love it, it was very fitting for her.

I like how you set it out a few years from the events, and how it was ended, *gasp* It was beautiful. The whole story has been genuinely realistic and amazing in every possible way, if only it was published :D

I've enjoyed reading it, thank you for writing it!

[clears throat]

I feel weird calling this a story. (Partially because it is the length of a novel and could easily be a bestseller.) It was so much more than that. I felt like I was going through this and suffering through this with Wolfgang and Tzipora (such a pretty name for such a pretty girl). I loved this so, so much. While I'm sad that it's over, I'm really happy that I can rest knowing that all is well. This was amazing, thank you. It'll forever be in my top Mibba forevers. And maybe, just maybe, I'll see it on the shelves of Barnes & Noble.

Oh my God this ending brought me to tears. Such a beautiful ending I love every word of it!!!!!! I can't help but crying on Tzipora-Wolfgang gravestone scene. After all this time so her name is Tzipora! :) I wish I could see more Wolfgang but this one is also perfect. Danke for the beautiful story I hope you will write many awesome stories. I'm giving you a standing applause. Great job! And keep writing please, you are talented.

I cried so hard, especially when they visited the gravestone. I nearly broke down at the end! Wow it's really over, it's been a long journey. I loved this story so much I can't even find the appropriate words to describe it, no words could do it justice. Never stop writing, you're amazing.

So I did really well until they stopped at the cemetery, of course. Then I cried for the rest of the epilogue. This story was...just fucking wonderful. I'm SO glad you suggested it to me when I was offering reads and comments. Thank you for sharing this with Mibba!

This story was amazing. Great job!
And the end! DA FEEELS!

SHE'S HOME! And her papa is there!!!!!!! I think I've had tears in my eyes the whole time I was reading the last two chapters. I can't believe there's only one left!

SHE'S HOME! And her papa is there!!!!!!! I think I've had tears in my eyes the whole time I was reading the last two chapters. I can't believe there's only one left!

OMG OMG OMG, SHE'S HOOOOMMMMMEE FINALLY!!!!! I'm so happy right now, update soon!

Oh man... I love how you slowly introduced six again, with small things about her that Wolfgang always mentioned, like her eyes. I' glad she's finally getting away! Update soon

I was hoping that someone would save Wolfgang at that him and Six could live happily ever after.

But I'm so very glad she's going home! This is such an amazing story.

Noooo Wolfgang died! Why did you do this to me I love your update I hope things are looking up. You're awesome!

Oh man, those feels... I can't wait to read the next update, maybe by some miracle Wolfgang will live, update soon!

I hate this story so much! It always makes my heart leap up!

lol

I don't know how you could manage such wonderful story! I'm not a big fan of Nazi-Jew but damn this story ASDFGHJKLASDFGHJKL. You have talent, man! If this go to the publisher this would be BAM! Another best selling novel! My opinion about this story is you're so descriptive when telling about what happened with the Jews in the camp, somehow it's disturbing and I got eerie chills, though I'm not really sure it really happened or you put spices in there, but the way you bring it into story is so great. Hands down one of the best stories found in Mibba.

I just hope you keep your promise (like Vater keeping his promise lol) to update it in two weeks :P or else I'll hunt you down hahahah just kidding. Have a great day, I wish you well in holiday!

Btw, I was wondering, how could you know the Holocaust really well? Do you read many books about it? Or do you have a witness relative that pass the story about Holocaust?

Automatically I can see this story is from around the WWII era when Hitler was hunting Jews. I'm not particularly interested in stories such as these because I don't find myself being able to keep my attention to it very long but I think you do a marvelous job writing and if I could keep myself interested I would read all the chapters. The layout itself is very interesting with the number as the title which before reading you'd assume was a Jews number because of the way they were stripped of their identities. Overall, the writing is smooth and I think you did an excellent job, good read :)