635798 - Comments

You should definitely show this story to your teacher! It's so amazing, they will agree. It's exciting showing your work to others when you're confident enough with it :) And you have many reasons to be confident in this story, it's not only well-written, but the plot is exciting and twisted but realistic. By the way, super happy they made it out alive - I was so sure that Wolfgang was gonna die in the gas chamber with six. No matter how fast or slow the updates, you're still wanting to put effort into it so that's what matters!

I'm glad they made it and that for now, they are safe. I think Wolfgang needed to tell the truth...People needed to know. They needed to know a lot sooner, but I digress. Anyway, you should share this with your teacher. It's an amazing story that is well-written and very real--and I don't mean that just because it's based on historical fact, I mean you didn't shy away from any of the realities, and that makes this something very special.

I just found this story today and couldn't stop reading it! I usually don't like historical fiction, especially involving the Holocaust, but I love this. I love Six and Wolfgang's relationship. You should show it to your teacher!

You should definitely show this to your teacher, who wouldn't want to read this? It's so realistic

What a relief. It's been been 4 days since the update and I've just gone around and read it now which I am sorry for. (School sucks balls!) But anyway, I'm glad that they've reached there, how do I say it, safely? (that's totally not the right word for they had to undergo waaaaay too many sticky situations to get there) Well what I wanted to say is that I'm happy to have read this chapter and catch up with this story. I have so much love for this. 'Til the next update!

My biggest hope is that Shlomo doesn't rat them out. I just don't trust him. BUT for the moment, I am relieved that they made it to a safe place. Ready for Six to get rinsed off, at the least, and some clothing and some medicine! Bless her heart. I don't think I've ever wanted someone to survive any situation as much as I want her to.

They got out *sigh of relief* but how long will they have to hide?

I don't even know how to react to this. I was so happy when he managed to get her out and I was leaning forward, biting my lip, as I read about him making a break for it...I was hopeful. And now I'm all because I'm worried about the fact that they have to stay hidden for three days!!!!!! Maybe someone will come along and help them. *fingers crossed*

This is one intense story! I read the summary and knew it was going to be a great story. Right from the start I was already heartbroken. I feel so much towards the main female character. I respect her so much, but to get up in a guy like that is bad news! I clearly have to read more to know what will happen and why she is choosing this.

I'm happy to see such a great story have so many reviews! You deserve them!
I'm going to keep reading.

I'm kind of getting "All the Light We Cannot See" vibes, and I mean that in a very positive way. I really like how well written the introduction is and how you don't give us her actual name, but her number.

This is a very mature topic that takes a lot to pull off and pull of well.

And you seem to be on the right track with that.

So keep it up cause this is really amazing!

Wolfgang and 635798 were almost gassed! Well I guess the phrase “We die together.” would fit snugly at this point. Keep updating

This is the best story I have ever stumbled upon. I don't think I have enough words to describe how good this is. I've been in tears and smiling throughout the whole story. Great job and keep it up. I cannot wait for more.

I wonder if they'll make it or get caught

You're going to break me heart

SOMEONE FREAKING SAVE HER LIKE WTF CMON
Vater frustrates me deeply. >.>

If she dies I will cry :(

I'm trying to find some ounce of pity for his father somewhere inside, but I just can't. Mostly because I'm frustrated that even now that he's stopped being a part of the problem, he still refuses to be part of the solution. Seriously. He said he wanted to repay his friend and yet, he won't. He has given up and I almost hate him more for that than for all of his other war crimes. There has to be some way out of this for Six, though. I can't stand it if there's not. Wolfgang has to think of something!!!! And I am going to say it, because I know everyone's thinking it...I'm amazed it took Six this long to break. She's a very strong woman. She has endured so much. I would have given in a long time ago; there is no way I could have survived all that she has. I admire her.

holy crap what's gonna happen to six?

swap;

i've actually read your introduction so i'll just go ahead & pick up from where i left off.

i really like where i've started. wolfgang's character is quite the rebel. forced to join the nazi's bc he didn't leave in time for the u.s army. it's nice to see the german empire shine a spotlight on a true man who didn't want to scapegoat jews into near extinction + the fact that this man's father forced him to join bc he feared hitler -- well, as promising as it sounds, i can see from a parental view why he was so scared. nonetheless, certain individuals need to stand up for what they believe in & no doubt crosses my mind that wolfgang would do such a thing if needed.

it's so striking when you see vater & the others politely speaking to wolfgang like he's a human yet when it comes down to dealing with a jew, it's almost as if they're kicking around pieces of trash. tbh, it's always bothered me when watching movies/documentaries or reading stories much like this how cruel mankind could be. but it's that type of bothersome feeling that enhances how real the feelings are & you've done a brilliant job in enhancing a piece into so much more than that.

Wow, you must have done a lot of research for this story, I love it and am actually interested in learning more about the war here soon. It's all very interesting and I'm excited to see what you do with this story. Keep it up