635798 - Comments

I agree with @bmxs38 I can't wait until the next chapter.... two weeks.... ugh. Thank you for this update :)

Please tell me the camp gets liberated or someone starts shooting or SAVES HIM OR SOMETHING OMG

Please tell me the camp gets liberated or someone starts shooting or SAVES HIM OR SOMETHING OMG

So now I'm going to be sitting over here, praying for some kind of solution in which Wolfgang doesn't die, until the next update. Thank you. Lol.

WHAT!

Okay, so, I'm one of those infamous silent readers, but oh my god. I can't react to that in silence! There's no way he can die, right? Because he's the narrator. If Wolfgang (I really, really love his name) dies, who will tell the story? Sigh. Until the next update.

NOOO WHYYYYYY

NO! That can't...

And yeah, what did happen to Gretel?

What happened to gretel?

What happened to gretel?

If I could recommend this story 1000 times I'd definitely do that.

Sorry I've taken so long, ANYWAYS! I loved these two chapters, the last one was mind blowing, beautifully written, dialog was great and I love how Six is transforming. Looking forward to the next update!

Awh! This chapter was so cute!
I'm nervous though . . . It seems like everything gets better & BAM! Drama bomb goes off (no pun intended with the bomb thing).

They are too cute together! And I love how the Sister didn't mind them kissing, even if the others did. Your author's note has me worried...

I love it when Six is happy, it instantly makes the chapter so much happier. How you described everything, even the gifts and Six's reaction to them was amazing, I wonder what's going to happen next, I can't wait for it though! :)

Loved it! I don't know what else to say...It was a relatively light chapter in the midst of all the darkness surrounding them, and it made me feel good to read about their laughter and merriment, the games and the gifts, and Six experiencing her first Christmas and loving the dress he bought her. Everything about this was so good. I was smiling the whole time.

Candy bowl! OK first off your layout is beautiful! The numbers 635798 look like they've been tattooed in an arm, just like in your story. Your story is pretty good. The tension, pain and fear was palpable. I felt some fear reading this. You made this subject truly come alive! I'll read more of the chapters, but I felt like I was making you wait too long for a comment. So here it is! Anyway, the main character's speech impediment was believable and sometimes that's hard for us writers to portray. You did a good job on this! :)

I love this chapter, it's so happy and light, just a nice twist, though I am concerned on rather or not Lenz is going to give up his search for six. Excellent all around, update soon!

I love this chapter, it's so happy and light, just a nice twist, though I am concerned on rather or not Lenz is going to give up his search for six. Excellent all around, update soon!

I watched it! Now I understand why everyone hates clowns.
What about tonight's The Walking Dead?

I'm hoping for a happy ending but I'll just wait and see.

I feel like Six is going to end up being right about that no longer being a safe place.