Omg!!! I'm glad she kind of sat around and thought of the consequences of her and Brian dating, but he is not a patient anymore. So I don't see a problem with it!! I still feel like it's fate with them!!! Ray and Jimmy crack me up!! Ray almost seems like a gay Jimmy which I love!! Their little pre-date was so cute!! I love how he holds her hand and the kiss on the hand?!? Ahhh to fucking perfect! Her reaction was great!!! I can't wait for their date!!! Thank you for updating so fast!!! Can't wait for more!! You write Brian and the rest of the guys perfectly!!
omg girl is there any story you write that I don't like? ahahah you're getting better and better and I feel like Kara.. my stomach is full of butterflies! that's what this chapter did to me!! awesome as always! I think it's normal that Kara feels this way. It's been a while since she felt that way and she's scared at the same time. Abou brian I'm still clueless but I guess we'll have to wait and see :p and it was a good first date. Just relax and having fun seems like the best option! :D loved this!!!
@ rachthebat. Hahaha. I'm absolutely thrilled that you like it so much!
I know, poor Brian was so sick at the beginning of the chapter. I'm going to have to make some short time jumps in the upcoming chapter to keep it from dragging on and on forever and a day, but I didn't want to make it seem unrealistic. I don't know that much about the situation I put him in to be honest, but as you said an accident of that magnitude doesn't get better in only a few weeks.
I knew you would enjoy babbling Brian! He's just sooo damn cute like that!
Hoping to have more up either tonight or tomorrow morning! Thanks so much for commenting!
@ pennycausesdread I'm happy that it makes you smile! Thanks so much for continuing to read and leave your feedback!
@ YourLoveIsMyLifeline Brian's cheekiness is as fun to write as it is to read, I'm sure! I honestly have no idea how to describe a Hershey Kiss other than it's a bite size piece of chocolate wrapped in colorful foil. You can copy and paste this link for a visual, but they're REALLY yummy!--->http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_7qsq9PvZ7NI/TPqOgl5eUiI/AAAAAAAASGs/N1l3Mr4Cky0/s1600/hersheys-kisses.png
@ xmissjajiaix Hope to have more up tonight or tomorrow! Thanks for reading and commenting!
@ AJ9 We'll find out soon! Hope to have more posted shortly! Thanks for reading!
@ Ca20000 Loopy Brian IS a lot of fun! Not sure if we'll see him loopy in that way again, but we'll definitely see a crazier side of him soon!
@ RyeBellamy Glad you're enjoying it! We'll find out what she does in the next chapter! Hope to have it posted soon!
@ akmo4725 LOL pouting Brian is definitely fun! We'll see what she does shortly! Thanks for reading/commenting!
@ synystergirl Thanks so much for letting me know you enjoy it so far! I'm glad you like it! Hope you got a good night's rest! Thanks for reading and commenting!
Just read the first chapter and loved it!!!! Would love to read more but it's 3:00 in the morning and I need to get some sleep right now. Can't wait to read more tomorrow
Awww!!!! I love how long these chapters are!! Brian and Kara are perfect for each other!!! Technically he isn't her patient anymore so I say fuck the rules!!! She should go for it and bring him the smoothie, but act like she forgot it so he will pout!!!
Awww!!!! I love how long these chapters are!! Brian and Kara are perfect for each other!!! Technically he isn't her patient anymore so I say fuck the rules!!! She should go for it and bring him the smoothie, but act like she forgot it so he will pout!!!
I don't want to sound like an idiot but what's a Hersey kiss? I know (and love) peanut buttercups but we don't have Hersey kisses in Ireland? Disadvantages of leaving in a shit country :L Love Brian's cheekiness though. He's so cute.
Oh my god, you're right! I'm smiling like a crazy person just reading it! XD Oh Brian, you smooth bastard you!
Poor guy at the start of this chapter, though. No one likes throwing up, but I'm glad they figured out what was causing it and made him all better again. I like that you're not rushing his recovery. Obviously, being a nurse, you know you're stuff, haha. But I like that he's not going home just yet. An accident of that magnitude doesn't just get better in a few weeks.
Now. Onto Brian again. He's making me swoon and laugh all over the damn place! I FREAKING LOVE HIM IN THIS! When he came back from the tests and started babbling, oh man, I laughed so hard!
@ YourLoveIsMyLifeline Thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
@ Ca20000 Brian is definitely a cutie when he squeezes Kara's hand and relies on her so much to help him through everything. Thanks for continuing to read!
@ pekigirl I'm so happy you like the new story! I totally understand with college though, it's really hard to find the time to do things you like to do. I should soo... be studying right now LOL. Thanks for taking the time to let me know you enjoyed it!
@ akmo4725 I think you may be right! It may have been fate that brought Brian and Kara together. We'll see what's in the cards for them in the future! Thanks for reading and letting me know you liked it!
@ Starbabyekj Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it! Posting the next chapter in a few minutes!
@ plbrinson Thank you so much! More to come momentarily!
@ RyeBellamy Thanks for letting me know! I'm glad I'm not boring anyone with my details. Sometimes it's hard to tell when it's too much or too little. New chapter shortly!
@ AJ9 Glad you took the time to check it out! Thanks for giving it a chance and letting me know what you thought! Posting next chapter now!
@ rachthebat. Thanks so much for your sweet comments! I'm really excited that you like it. I've had this idea for a while and finally had the chance to start writing it.
Judging by the way you like the way you like how I tend to write Brian in other stories, I think you'll really like it this time too. We're going to get to see the best of both sides in this one. Plus, now we already know he has a weak spot when it comes to Kara. The dynamic between them is going to be a lot different than the dynamics between him and his other friends/past relationships! Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts! Posting more now!
@ Snezenka Thanks for coming back to read more! I'm so happy you're enjoying the story so far and thankful that you shared your thoughts. Brian will start to get even better soon and we'll see how that starts to change other aspects of the story. More coming in a few minutes!
You've done it again, my dear. You've gotten me hooked to another of your stories! Only two chapters in, and I am in love with it!!
Gah, I'm all emotional now! Haha. So sweet that Brian was more responsive to Kara over Ray and the others, that he thought she was an angel when he first opened his eyes. And the way he handled McKenna crying on him, I got teary!
You already know how much I love your Brian, but in this, I just know I'm gonna love him Just getting over almost dying, and he's back to his cocky self haha.
But I think he needed to hear that from Kara. He's a man, of course he's going to want to cover up any embarrassment and fear with cockiness, but he doesn't need to do that with her. She knows what he went though. I think that will make them grow closer, too.