Trade Baby Blues for Wide-Eyed Browns - Comments

Aw, I'm glad his parents are okay with it, I was kinda expect his mom to snap, but I was pleasantly surprised

@ What_a_catch_lauren
In progress Glad you're liking it!!

Oh my god! I'm dying here. I cannot wait for the next chapter

@ chynnablueink
No you're on the right path :)

@ birds ate my face
LOL, do you think I'm dragging it out too long? I have a game plan, but I don't want people to get bored or anything ;)

Oh no, I'm worried now, I don't know what's gonna happen and I wanna know! Anticipation is killing me, but I hope I don't have to wait long *wink wink*

Yep, Pete is bad, dirty and I'll love it forever :) I just hope it doesn't come back to bite him in the butt

@ birds ate my face
He is a top class asshole. But man, he's Pete. You can't not love him.

@ What_a_catch_lauren
Glad you think so! Thanks so much for reading!

@ sodapop curtis
You totally just made my day. ::hugs: I'm always paranoid I'm not getting Pete/Patrick right, because I know it'd completely screw the story, so you saying that just made me feel 10000x better.

I feel like I should send you flowers or something. Srsly, thank you so much. <3

"Her pale, snowy legs were wrapped around mine. Like Yin and Yang, twisted together. Babes in the wood.

She was light, I was dark. But we both had brown eyes—pieces of darkness in both of us. Blips. Spots. Stains."

"I toyed with the idea of waking her up so she could paint the walls inside my head with more words. I didn’t. Instead, I closed my eyes and did what she told me. Each piece of me, turned off, one by one.

When I opened my eyes again, she was gone."

Okay, you write Pete so fucking well. You got his personality spot on and it adds so much depth to this story. Patrick, as well. I wasn't going to comment until I was caught up with the most recent chapter (spoilers u no) but damn, dude. I had to comment after reading that chapter in Pete's POV. You're a really talented writer.

This is getting so exciting

I kinda wanna kick his ass for sure

@ birds ate my face
LOL What did you think?

Oh man

@ safe bet.
Haaaaaaaa! I loved writing that. Shame everything's gonna go to shit.

WHAT. WHAT. WHAT.

@ Videl
It means so much that you think I can write Pete and Patrick--I'm so worried it just comes off shitty and not authentic. (And I seriously love you for the running commentary. I want to send you flowers. Or a cake.)

@ Videl
It means so much that you think I can write Pete and Patrick--I'm so worried it just comes off shitty and not authentic. (And I seriously love you for the running commentary. I want to send you flowers. Or a cake.)

@ Videl
LOL, that's one of my favourite lines (the one about him running up walls). It just came to me and I felt like it really characterised him.