Trade Baby Blues for Wide-Eyed Browns - Comments

@ Videl
Haha, yeah, she makes me laugh sometimes too :p

@ Videl
Eeee, so glad you're liking it!!

I steeled myself and stood, lifting my hoodie to reveal Pete’s t-shirt beneath.

“Hey, now—” Patrick started

ah this is great. you've got patrick down too. i laughed when she yelled his name and he jumped :D

i have to say, the smut was quite great as well. good job :)

“Jesus,” was all I could say.

“No, I’m Pete.”

this is perfect, you really have a knack for writing pete, his personality is all right. it's great

“Jesus,” was all I could say.

“No, I’m Pete.”

this is perfect, you really have a knack for writing pete, his personality is all right. it's great

He’d flirt with a floor mop if it’d sigh for him

this is genius.

He’d flirt with a floor mop if it’d sigh for him

this is genius.

He’d flirt with a floor mop if it’d sigh for him

this is genius.

He’d flirt with a floor mop if it’d sigh for him

this is genius.

He seemed to swear more the more excited he got, and right now he looked like he was ready to run up walls.

I'm laughing at this because it's right on

i'm laughing anna's inner dialogue is hilarious

this is exciting so far!

@ safe bet.

Thank you!! I'm so glad you think so!!

And thank you for that, LOL. I would've never figured that one out on my own.

@ birds ate my face
I have a feeling I'll probably end up rewriting this at some point. :p At the moment I'm just kinda letting it take me where it wants to, seeing where it ends up. And I love that you love it, 'cause we both know I am in *love* with your stuff.

Yeah, I knew they weren't getting along during BND, I'm gonna try to work that in--when they went to the recording studio they were supposed to be bouncing ideas around for "From Now On We Are Enemies" and Alpha Dog to go on the BND album they released in November (I know it's a long time gap between the BND tour and the album but I'm hoping they at least started talking about possible tracks, LOL)

I forgot that Joe specifically hated Folie, thanks for the reminder!! Yeah, I figured that if Bronx hadn't been in the picture, and if he hadn't met Ashlee, Pete might have turned into a total party-boy (worse than he already was, I mean). I don't know what it is, I kinda like the idea of Pete with an addiction. Is that sick? LOL

I'll be sure to come to you if I need to know anything, and thanks so much for reading, seriously. SERIOUSLY. Your comments really inspire me by making me think about what I'm writing, and how I could do it differently.

(I was watching the video of Pete in the bear hat earlier to remind myself of the way he talks. Cracks me up every time. "Yeah, my teeth are shiny and I have a lot of them, I don't know why")

@ chynnablueink
Just do what you feel is best, go with your gut, it is your story after all. Even if you don't like how it turned out later you can rewrite it :) I've rewritten my Pete triology more than twice, so you know, you can always fix what you want later :)
I truly love this story, and I love how much you update, you're just like me, I don't feel like such a dope being the only person who updates constantly, I'm not alone!

Also, some advice if you need it, during bnd the band weren't really talking to each other, Joe hated folie, and they did their last show in November 09. I'm just helping if you didn't know all this, I sure didn't until 2011 when I read about their hiatus fully. Since Pete had Bronx, he wasn't on pills, but since this is a fanfic, I guess you wrote it the way he would be without Bronx. He like got bad in 2011 after Ashlee left him, so I guess if Anna ever left his side he would spiral. I hope this helps, if you need any more info, you can ask :) believe me, I'm like the wentz dictionary

This is so good. And just so you know, to hyperlink you do it like this: [*url=whatever website you want*]what ever words you want to appear[/url] Just without the asterisks

@ birds ate my face
I wrote the last chapter before I read this comment, just so you know. :) Wow, I never really considered having her go home, but yeah, maybe you're right--maybe she should be the one to disappear on him, rather than the other way around. It would definitely be more true to Anna's character. I think she'd hate me if I made her sit around waiting for him, LOL. I love Pete, but Patrick always seems more trustworthy and dependable to me.

I'm conflicted now, not sure if I would trust Pete, but I'm positive Anna can trust patrick. In my opinion, please don't take this as pressuring you, I think she should go home, work out her plans, with Christina and then return. Make Pete want her and be a helpless little pup lol whatever you choose to write I'll probably, no I will like it a lot :)

I know what you mean when you start writing something and you don't wanna stop!
I'm so excited for them!