Trade Baby Blues for Wide-Eyed Browns - Comments

@ less16candles
That's exactly it! Haha. Final chapter is up tonight--I'm both nervous and excited to see what everyone thinks!!

@ Let_it_go
I had a great time, and thank you for your lovely words! Comments like that always make my day. I want to slap them both, too!!

@ milesandmaisy
No, he really doesn't. I'm thinking you'll be happier with the sequel, though. ;)

@ khuckles
Final chapter is up tonight! Yeah, I'd be surprised, too. I'm not really sure how much she knows about what's gone on/who Anna is, and I wouldn't put it past Pete to just lie to her, but I guess we'll see. :))

@ bobobo
The sequel will hopefully be better for Patrick--it's probably going to end up being a split POV between he and Anna, but we'll see. He deserves better than this, though, I agree!! Glad you think I'm being true to life. I'm trying to convey what I think both Patrick and Pete's mindsets would've been around that time--neither of them were really fully mature yet; it's only later that I think they both grew up. My opinion, anyway. :))

@ TheOnlyBurningCandle
It's playing with mine, too!! I'm desperate to get onto the sequel, so can't wait to get this final chapter done.

@ What_a_catch_lauren
Thank you for that!! I always like hearing when people have actually gotten the feels from this, gives me so much more confidence in the story.

@ holysmokes13
Haha, I'm glad you haven't been able to figure it out because that means I'm doing this right--wouldn't want to make it too obvious, LOL. ;P Thank you for the comment!

@ star collision.
I honestly want to kiss you for that comment. Seriously. Thank you.

@ sodapop curtis
You were giggling? omg. I love love love hearing when people have actually had feels/reactions, so thank you.

@ Videl
Thank you!! <3

@ MrsBrightside
Final chapter is up tonight, sequel tomorrow!! THANK YOU XXX

@ birds ate my face
Maybe. ;)

@ milesandmaisy
And I love YOU.

@ less16candles
Ahah, we shall see! ;P

@ star collision.
We'll definitely be seeing Stars again, although not in the context you might think. I like her, too. :o) She was only supposed to be a peripheral character, but her role is becoming more important by the second. I know, poor Trick. :(

Poor Patrick. I wanna cuddle this guy. I wonder if Stars will make any more appearances. I like her quite a lot. It was good to see Patrick thinking about Anna's age and then heartbreaking to see him thinking about the marriage thing. Bless him.

Poor Patrick. I wanna cuddle him. I wonder if this Stars will make any more appearances. I like her a lot. It was good to see Patrick thinking about Anna's age, but heart breaking to see him thinking about the marriage thing. Poor sweetheart.

i like stars!! maybe she'll end up with pete & hopefully be closer to 19 than 16

HOLY FUCKBALLS! I CAN'T WAIT!!! love, love, love this! <3

I wonder if Stars will take Anna's place...

OKAY WHERE THE FUCK IS THE SEQUEL?! IT CANNOT END LIKE THIS. AGH. PLEEEAASSSSEEE MAKE ONE THIS IS SOOOO GOOD.

that chapter was so great, perfectly done. I couldn't read his words fast enough. well done!

Also thank you for the plug, my love <3 !!!

omg I'm sorry I've been soooo behind on everyone's stories so I'm only just now catching up. You update so fast, I swear I can't keep up. ANYWAY I just finished chapter 59 and I just have to say

“Take me to your leader.”

holy fuck that is SO Pete

I was giggling so hard at the stupid arrogant way he was acting and then him grabbing her and kissing her as the police came up the stairs reminded me of some kind of 40's film noir where the guy is wearing a trench coat and a fedora and has a transatlantic gangster accent and the girl has pin curls and red lipstick and he dips her when they kiss as the romantic strings play in the background and the fireworks go off omg

Fucking Pete and his poetic words and suicidal tendencies. Not gonna lie, there were tears in my eyes. Every words that comes out of Pete's mouth is poetry and it just hits me so hard. You right so beautifully and it's honestly magical and always so moving. I hope Anna doesn't go back to England. She's doing the right thing, I think. It's not fair to Patrick and anyone else involved. So much suspense.

I'm gonna faint. Fucking Pete. Is she going back to England? Because if she stays with Violet that is 100% not solving the problem. And omg she's so going to hurt Patrick anyway. I really want to know how this will end because I have no idea. Sometimes I'm like "ye she and pete will be together", sometimes "yES, she and Patrick will be together", but right now I'm like "will she end up with someone else? Alone? Being lesbian with Violet???? Idk man. I'll have to wait for the amazing sequel:}

I will admit that I near enough cried at that. Pete and Anna are perfect, but so are Patrick and Anna. Gawd this is so frustrating

God, this is playing with my emotions... I love this story, can't wait for the next update!! X

Also: I can totally see this happening in real life with Jeanae, poor thing. I would not be surprised if this was similar to his mindset a few years ago.

Oh my god the suspense is killing me. I can't even imagine what's going to happen! Patrick definetly deserves better, but there aren't enough good Patrick fics on this website and you're so good at it haha

Mmm. I think Patrick is still too hurt at this point to convince her, and that he knows its whats best. But I would be surprised if Ashlee went through with marrying Pete after all that. Thanks for updating, I was missing this!

as sad as this is, it's really the best move. not that i believe that either of them will be able to stay away from each other. and I know I beat this whole 'poor Patrick' thing to death, but ugh! that kid doesn't deserve this...

I just want to slap them both, and then smoosh their faces together and ughhhhhh you're killing me here.
And poor baby Patrick too!
Excellent chapter. Your writing is still blowing my mind and I need more.
Have fun on vacation!

She should've told Pete to grow up and forget about his Peter Pan fantasies; honestly, I wana smack Pete for being so childish. Anna should go to England for a good year, get herself together, maybe change her look up and go to school, become a better woman. Patrick is strong, he'll move on, we know Pete won't ever, but he could try. I'm not worried about Patrick, he's the only level headed one in this love triangle