Trade Baby Blues for Wide-Eyed Browns - Comments

Even though Pete & Anna are bad for each other, I can't help feeling they're very much meant to be together. Like how two negatives make a positive, that's Pete and Anna. (i read this whole thing today & now im desperate for an update :O)

you know I will take him anytime ;)

@ bobobo
Putting the next chapter up later, I have a feeling Anna isn't going to be thrilled with Pete when she sees him!

@ birds ate my face
They both deserve it. But maybe that's the point--they're both as bad as each other!

@ holysmokes13
LOL, thank you for that comment!! Not gonna lie, it was hard to write. I want to make everything sunshine and rainbows but they just keep screwing things up for themselves. I honestly just want her and Patrick to skip off into the sunset together right now. I don't even know. We'll see! Thank you for reading! xo

@ milesandmaisy
LOL, maybe I should just let you have him. You'd definitely treat him better than Anna does. ;) thank you for always commenting. Imaginary pizza coming your way!

@ mswrite85
Thank you! So glad you're still liking it. I like slipping into Pete's mind sometimes. Tis a weird and wonderful place, so I'm glad you're finding it authentic :))

@ Stumpslumps01
Maybe ;) Who knows!

@ Vampire vengeance
This story is a plethora of screwed-upness and all of the characters seem to like making their own lives hard. I'll be honest; this was not how I envisioned things going at the start, but once I started to write them, I realised I couldn't just force them to do what I wanted them to do--I had to let them be true to themselves and do what came naturally. Which is how we ended up here. :p Anna being pregnant again would've thrown her for six, I think. I don't think she could handle that right now. Thank you for being torn, because it means you're getting into the story. :)

@ ban3795
You binged on my story?? Okay, I need to buy you a pizza. Thank you so much for your comment. When you're writing something piece by piece instead of all as one it's hard to know whether it's coming across right or whether it even flows at all, so comments like yours make my day. I wrote half a chapter on the plane so just gotta finish up and post it!! Hopefully later today! Seriously, I love you for saying all that.

@ What_a_catch_lauren
I'll try! :p

Have a great time in Egypt by the way

I sat down and read the entire thing through tonight. Holy shit this is an emotional roller coaster and I just have so many feelings I can't even like what how did you even do this. Okay Patrick should have listened to her/let her explain cause her "I don't want a baby right now" logic totally makes sense and Pete should just go fuck himself. This is like reading the Notebook but worse because it's self sabotage and worst almost. YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON oh and enjoy Egypt!

I am so torn I want to feel bad for everyone and blame everyone at the same time. I am a little sad yet relieved that Ana wasn't pregnant. I have no idea who to root for anymore.

Nooooo please she has to end up with patrick! It might just be too early for a possibility result?

"Put another dime in the jukebox. You can only blame your problems on the world for so long before it all becomes the same old song. Mine has gone platinum."

That. THAT. Right there. Genius.

I can't even deal with it right now, but it felt so right to read those words. My dear, you keeping breaking and mending and breaking my heart again. And I love it. Great chapter, as always!

"Put another dime in the jukebox. You can only blame your problems on the world for so long before it all becomes the same old song. Mine has gone platinum."

That. THAT. Right there. Genius.

I can't even deal with it right now, but it felt so right to read those words. My dear, you keeping breaking and mending and breaking my heart again. And I love it. Great chapter, as always!

can't wait to hear about Download! so annoyed with Pete! he's such a fucking tool! he can't get pissed at her when he's started over with Ashlee! oh, and poor, poor Patrick :( I want to cry for him...and, you know, make him feel better ;)

My comment was posted twice... Oh well, guess I'll just edit this one... I still want my pony:}

OH MY FUCKING GOD *punches the wall* GIMME MY UNICORN RIGHT NOT BECAUSE THIS CHAPTER JUST FUCKED ME UP. PATRICK NO. ANNA, NOO, PETE NOPE NOPE NO NO. Though he's kind of a dick, he doesn't deserve any bad. I have no idea how this is going to end, it's all really twisted. BUT JFC PATRICK MY PRETTY PATRICK, SO HURT. Omg I need another chapter to feel better, but somehow I know it's not gonna be actually better. Anyway, thanks for the chapter, amazing as always:}

I wanna smack Pete upside his head I swear, Anna too!

Ugh noooooo! Anna doesn't deserve PatRick but Pete always gets what he wants >_>

@ birds ate my face
Does seem like that would be the best thing.

@ bobobo
Haha, thank you for that! I'm glad things aren't easily worked out, I'd hate for it to be an obvious and boring read for everyone.

@ milesandmaisy
I so wish I lived in the U.S. D: D: I'd KILL to go to MONUMENTOUR! Patrick deserves to be treated 1000 times better, I agree with you. Anna needs to get her shit together.

@ What_a_catch_lauren
There's a whoooole sequel to come yet, but thank you so much!! Really makes my day to hear things like that.

@ mswrite85
I had an AMAZING time, thank you She's going to be the death of me, too!! Such a pain in the ass character. I'd say sorry for breaking your heart, but all good stories do, so I'm kinda glad you're feeling it, you feel me? LOL. ;)

@ Let_it_go
You binged on my story? And you didn't die of boredom?! Wow! Thank you!! I'd love to know how it flows when you read it all as one. Might have to read it all back myself once the first part is done, though I'll probably end up hating it (most people seem to think their own stuff sucks, haha)

@ holysmokes13
Your comment made my entire month. Seriously. Thank you so much for taking the time to write it. I honestly want to frame it and put it on my wall. And send you flowers. And a pony. And, like, a bazillion tons of chocolate. Wow. Thank you. x

@ star collision.
I DON'T HATE YOU Don't be silly, I'm just amazed people actually take the time to comment at all. I'm really mad at Anna, so I'm way with you on that one. It's easy to forget she's still a teenager and a lot younger than Pete and Patrick, too, so she's not really as emotionally mature--as Patrick, at least (her and Pete are probably on about the same level, LMFAO.) Hopefully you'll warm up to her a bit more in the sequel. She's gonna do some growing up--or at least, that's the plan, though she tends to mess up my plans with her own decisions, so we'll see.

It was AMAZING

I can't believe I forgot to comment?!?! (DON'T HATE ME) I'm kind of mad at Anna, not gonna lie. She's ruining these boys, honestly. But I can't help but pity her too. She's so conflicted, it's heartbreaking. I feel so sorry for Patrick. He doesn't deserve this at all. I cannot believe this is almost over! Looking forward to the sequel though. How was Download fest? I am incredibly jealous.

okay i just finished the 60 chapters and WOW, LIKE, WOWO. This story is perfect, your writing is so fluid, so tasteful, and you capture the character's essence pretty well. I'm very amazed. There are some parts that are just hilarious, specially when Pete is talking. But there's also these heartbreaking parts that, not gonna lie, had me crying like the wuss I am. I did cry. And that's how good you are writing. Also, at the very beginning, there was this part where Pete was playing like this points game, points for making Anna blush? Well the same day I read it I was playing points with my crush too, so reading that had me giggling stupidly. There are so many emotions to describe. I could go one chapter by one - but they're a lot. In conclusion, lemme kiss your feet, this story is amazing, hands down.

I read this on a binge. Can you stop breaking my heart please?!
Wonderful story!