In the Shallows - Comments

Normally I just read and never comment but that line -
"I wouldn' be who I am without ya, Lex. There ain't a me without ya."

Damn I shed a tear, got wrapped into this chapter.
<3

I read this entire story in a couple days and I'm so unbelievably obsessed with it. I can't wait to see what your next update is! :)

The last few chapters have been AMAZING! I'm sorry I have commented as much, I've been super busy but don't think I'm not till a faithful reader! I basically squeal every time I get an e-mail saying that this story has been updated.
Let me say one thing: Alex is a mutha fuckin BAD ASS. Even though she's beyond pissed that Daryl/Rick made her come and that creep was touching her.
Please update soon! <3 <3 <3

Ughhhhhhhh! I can't get over how addicting your story is! Everything about it just drives me obsession for TWD spiraling....it is seriously unhealthy but I do NOT regret it!! /evil laugh/ Don't even get me started on Alex and Daryl.....love it!

Because this," he growled, bringing my body close to his. I could feel the heat through my clothes, "is mine and it always will be."

Oomph. Damn did that give me serious chills dude. Holy fucking shit. Every chapter is making me just want to binge watch TWD all over again. I really hate Thomas. So glad that prick died in the show. Ugh. I am really loving Alex more and more. She's growing with every chapter, becoming such a badass without it being too out there, you know? I love her. And Daryl. Together. You know.. wink wink nudge nudge! LMAO.

Why are you such a brilliant writer with this? Best Daryl story ever. Can't wait for more to come!

It makes me sad that there weren't that many chapters out for me to catch up on, but I understand your reasoning with not having access to the fourth season.

YOU TEASE ME WITH THAT FRISKY SCENE OF DARYL AND ALEX IN THAT CELL. Ugh. If I were her, I'd just let him do whatever the hell he wanted to me. Ah. Daryl Dixon is too perfect. All these pictures/gifs at the end make my feels skyrocket like crazy. I went in reading with low feels and now I just want MORE OF HIM. And can we please just kill Tomas off already? I'm hating all this violation towards Alex (unless it's Daryl, ya know). I NEED MORE SMUT PLEASE.

I NEED ONE HOT STEAMY SCENE WITH DARYL AND ALEX! Please? Cause they're too perf together. For reals. I need this to happen. WHY ARE YOU SO PERF AT WRITING HIM?<3 Can't wait for more! :)

Can I completely say I wish two bullets and an arrow went in Tomas' ass? Because, seriously, I hate him. He literally pissed me off(and in the show, too, haha). But as always, amazing dear <3 keep up the good work and I cannot wait until next update :)

Oooooh, I really like that you have Carol making her crush known, most Daryl stories I've read completely omit that situation. That'll cause some nice drama between the three (:

Loved this chapter especially that ending. It's a change, instead of him being mad at her all the time! Cant wait for the next update. OH one more thing, I really like the relationship you created between Rick & her.

Great update, very well written. As I kind of mentioned in my last comment, I love seeing how Alex's relationships with the others are progressing. Especially with Daryl, they're adorable.

It's nice to get inside Daryl's head and find out what he thinks about all of this. Specifically, Alex. I enjoyed this chapter a lot actually. As much as I liked it from Daryl's POV, I also really like how there's someone who's in the group defending Rick. I hated seeing in the episode on him being attacked by everyone on not being a good leader, but in all honesty; if Alex was really a character on the show.. he wouldn't need all the other peoples. I wouldn't mind it just being him, Daryl, and Alex. LOL

But don't let those non-commenters discourage you from writing more Daryl POV chapters because I thoroughly enjoyed this very much so! You really have his language on point! Lol. Keep more coming, yeah? It's always nice to get inside a guys head and figure out what he's thinking about. HAHA ;)

It's nice to get inside Daryl's head and find out what he thinks about all of this. Specifically, Alex. I enjoyed this chapter a lot actually. As much as I liked it from Daryl's POV, I also really like how there's someone who's in the group defending Rick. I hated seeing in the episode on him being attacked by everyone on not being a good leader, but in all honesty; if Alex was really a character on the show.. he wouldn't need all the other peoples. I wouldn't mind it just being him, Daryl, and Alex. LOL

But don't let those non-commenters discourage you from writing more Daryl POV chapters because I thoroughly enjoyed this very much so! You really have his language on point! Lol. Keep more coming, yeah? :)

Agghhhhhhh!!! Fan girling so hard. You wrote that chapter so well when daryl storms off I was so pissed at first but when he grabs her and tells her he loves her and can't lose her I just about lost it!! Great updates as always and can't wait for the next!!!

Agghhhhhhh!!! Fan girling so hard. You wrote that chapter so well when daryl storms off I was so pissed at first but when he grabs her and tells her he loves her and can't lose her I just about lost it!! Great updates as always and can't wait for the next!!!

Oh my god. The last two chapters definitely made up for the lack of Daryl and Alex action you've been teasing me with for so long! Ugh. You have no idea how many times I read that last part of this recent update. Daryl is such a hardass, but damn does he make up for it with all that intimacy. Shit..

I also love how Alex sided with Rick because as much as I don't like him all too much in this last season; I really did think the group wasn't giving him enough credit in the first three seasons. Especially with that stupid Shane on his ass. SO glad he's dead. Good riddance. Definitely loving this newfound connection with Rick and Alex. Father figure to Alex, maybe? Or just a good friendship since Daryl will soon be his second-in-command and all.. :)

CANT WAIT FOR MORE! Favorite story of all time. AND OMG WHY ARE YOU MAKING ANOTHER STORY! LOL

Ohhhhhhh man. (: The ending with Alex and Daryl was just... amazing. I don't think I mentioned this before, but I like that you had Alex go with Rick and Shane, because now there's an actual witness to what Shane's plan was. I always felt like on the show that nobody, especially Lori, actually understood just how crazy Shane was, or believed that Rick really had no choice but to kill him. I think Daryl always believed him and saw Shane's true colors, but now Alex can really back Rick up because she saw it firsthand. On that note, I'm also really happy that Alex spoke up about people constantly questioning Rick. Again, it's nice that she has his back. I really love how this story is progressing, and as always I can't wait to read more!

I love love love this story! I actual squealed in delight when Daryl told Lex he loved her, and her reaction was just perfect. I can't wait for another update!!

I think this is one of those moments when Alex realizes she really should have listened to Daryl and watched her back. What's really great is that obviously Shane went crazy so Rick lost a brother in a way but of course what we know from watching the show is that he gains Daryl in the process. I love that you've now given Rick/Alex a pretty strong relationship as well. Rick has always seen her as an equal. So anxious to see what happens next!!! eeeeeeeek!

I think this is one of those moments when Alex realizes she really should have listened to Daryl and watched her back. What's really great is that obviously Shane went crazy so Rick lost a brother in a way but of course what we know from watching the show is that he gains Daryl in the process. I love that you've now given Rick/Alex a pretty strong relationship as well. Rick has always seen her as an equal. So anxious to see what happens next!!! eeeeeeeek!

I was so excited to see so many chapters after I was gone for a few days! So many things have happened! First of all, I'm so happy they admitted their feelings! And Alex talking about how Daryl deserves her love was just perfect. We knew the feeling was there, but to have her explain it in that way and talk about their childhood, I just couldn't contain the feels. I can't wait to read more and see how their relationship continues to develop!
Also, I must say, although I hate Shane, I thought it was kinda funny that he shot Alex, just because I can only imagine how long he's been wanting to do that, hahahah.