In the Shallows - Comments

Again, I'm thankful that Alex said something to Shane. I'm also glad that Alex went with them to find Hershel, and said that she didn't need to go ask Daryl. I must say that I really like Alex and how her character is developing. I can't wait for more! (:

Oh, Alex. You and those awesome outburst of awesomeness. Whoop Whoop! :)

Thank god she called Shane out, because I SO wish that somebody would have on the show.

You're writing in general is impeccable, but specifically because it's written in first person! I'm very much enjoying this story ((:

This is a great story :) I love Daryl and Alex's relationship, it's in that awkward cuteness really. And I love how Alex is such a little mouse, but with fireball tendencies-if that's right of me to say. You are such a great writer hun. Keep up the good work :)

I just want to say that throughout the day in constantly checking my email to see if there's an update from you and you never disappoint. See Daryl he's so scares to admit that he needs Alex. I'm really curious I find more about their past together. You went into detail a little bit, obviously Alex daryl and merele were all very close but Merle was also in and out and from what the show says Daryl always just followed him around and often go themselves into illegal/dangerous situations. I wonder where Alex fits into that... Just a thought! Loved this update and can't wait for the next!

So good! I love how often you update, I got to read three chapters back to back! I feel spoiled now haha!

First I love how much you update this story! SO awesome. Lex is definitely coming out of her shell and she is becoming such a badass. However it would kind of break my heart is Alex & Daryl stopped talking to each other. I think sometime soon Daryl will stop denying the feelings or whatever it is he feels towards her.

I think she should go with Rick and Shane! Sure, Daryl would be pissed, but I think it'd be interesting :) awesome story by the way c:

I feel like it would get really interesting if she didn't go with him, lots of potential drama after that!

I really like this story so far!
And honestly, I think Alex should go whether Daryl 'lets' her or not. I get that that's how their relationship is, but she shouldn't need permission, and she's right about them needing her. She's already begun to show more independence, and I feel like she should push for more.

Ahhh! Can't wait to see what happens after that conversation between the two!!!

Hope theres more soon love it so far

Daryl better go and save her!!! Can't wait to see what happens next !

Daryl better go and save her!!! Can't wait to see what happens next !

I love this story too! I love how you make them each unique from your others. Can't wait to read more!

This story is really awesome so far dude c: I absolutely love your writing c: update again whenever you can! :)

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Really really enjoying this!

Really really enjoying this!