In the Shallows - Comments

Oh, man! This chapter...this...this...amazing :o

OH as far as what I think will happen next is (well obviously the farm will crumble) but it will either be Alex who rides off on the motorcycle with him instead or Carol OR they somehow get separated while killing walkers on the farm and they freak out and can't find each other, Daryl still rides off with Carol but when they all meet together on the highway Alex gets out of one of the cars and they both realize the other is alive and its basically rainbows and unicorns from there :) hahaha just an idea!

OH as far as what I think will happen next is (well obviously the farm will crumble) but it will either be Alex who rides off on the motorcycle with him instead or Carol OR they somehow get separated while killing walkers on the farm and they freak out and can't find each other, Daryl still rides off with Carol but when they all meet together on the highway Alex gets out of one of the cars and they both realize the other is alive and its basically rainbows and unicorns from there :) hahaha just an idea!

The part in this chapter where Alex is talking about how Daryl deserved her love really hit me hard. The thing with Daryl is because of how people have treated him his whole life he doesn't think he deserves anything remotely good in life, let alone love. Yet heres Alex, there for him since day one, who buys him things on his birthday, how has always cared for him and stuck up/around for him. I don't think Daryl ever realized it but Alex has always been his exception or "weakness" which is probably why he is so terrified to let anything romantic happen between them in this new kind of world. Would you ever consider writing from Daryl's point of view for a chapter? I really love the way you write and I feel like you could nail his character dead on!
As always great update.
P.S - I love how you portray Shane as a shit head :p :)

only on part 20 but i really love this. keep it up :)

God damnit. I really thought when he pulled her back into him after that little tease from her.. that he was going to smack his lips against hers and then RIP OFF HER CLOTHES. UGH. I hope you know.. you're slowly killing me with this. So I hope you've prepared my eulogy because I'm not going to last much longer..

Anyways, I seriously admire how you write so perfectly well and how each and every chapter just makes it all the more real. Seriously, reading this story has me wanting to re-watch the episodes all over again because I can really picture Alex just as a regular character who is off to the side when Daryl isn't on-screen. But of course, we can't have it to wear Alex is actually a character. Oh how I wish it was your way. UPDATE SOON<3

Dale's death was like the saddest scene I watched, and it was worst since I was getting over Sophia's death in the show. But I love how you did it in this and I love how Daryl made Alex feel better about it. And awe, cute side Daryl ^_^

DARYL IS IN LOVE WITH ALEX. he keeps saying that this world isn't meant for them but clearly he can't hide the way he feels. It's not fair to either of them if he loves/cares about her but won't "be" with her because he's afraid of losing her and vice versa. The moment when he tells her that she's driving h crazy. daryl is so bad with words but it's so blatantly obvious that he's hopelessly in love her her. I can picture the moment when it happens and it's beautiful. This story is perfect. I love the little things he does to her. How he pulled her I his lap when dale was dying and how he nuzzles into her neck. It gives me butterflies just reading it!! Great update. <33

DARYL IS IN LOVE WITH ALEX. he keeps saying that this world isn't meant for them but clearly he can't hide the way he feels. It's not fair to either of them if he loves/cares about her but won't "be" with her because he's afraid of losing her and vice versa. The moment when he tells her that she's driving h crazy. daryl is so bad with words but it's so blatantly obvious that he's hopelessly in love her her. I can picture the moment when it happens and it's beautiful. This story is perfect. I love the little things he does to her. How he pulled her I his lap when dale was dying and how he nuzzles into her neck. It gives me butterflies just reading it!! Great update. <33

That little moment between Alex and Daryl made my heart all tingly and warm. Ah. He's too darn cute through all that hard ass, redneck exterior of his. My favorite part was when he stiffened at the mention of how those guys were looking/treating Alex.

Please update tonight woman! I NEED MORE. My Daryl feels are so beyond this universe right now. It's unbelievable! And you are way too sweet Kay! This update definitely made me feel loads better.<3

I am finally caught up with this story! It was way too good the moment I found my place till the most recent update. I was trying to click the next chapter button, but HAHA.. there wasn't one.

Anyways, this is absolutely amazeballs, Kay! I love how it follows the episodes to a tee and just how well Alex's character easily fits into it. Oh man, those moments with her and Daryl. That random kiss on that interstate to that damn shower scene? You're killing me. Can there please just be a random as smut scene for them soon? I die. I'm so glad that Alex has finally broken out of her "field mouse" shell. I literally applaud her for slapping Andrea and punching Shane on top of calling out his imperfections. Seriously. I wish someone had really done so for real in the show.

I truly do love Alex's character and her relationship with Daryl. As much as I hate how slow it is to get SOME sort of moment between them, I love it all the same because it's realistic and definitely has me hooked for more! SO UPDATE SOON GODDAMNIT. I need me some Daryl! Or I'll Dexter you to the bottom of the ocean.. SIKE. But no really. Make it happen..

ALEX IS SUCH A BADASS!
Like holy shit. Daryl is straight up going nuts now that she has a mind of her own. Aw so many feels when shes hugs him and gets butterflies. Its so obvious that Daryl wants/cares/loves her. When he stops for a second after Alex said she loved him, there is probably soo much going through his mind! Love love love love this story!!!!!

*Hands you some popcorn* Oh, yesh. It was popcorn worthy, so worthy that you shall have some XD haha
And yaay for weirdness! :3

Great chapter! After I wrote my last comment, I realized that there was no way Daryl could not be angry with Alex and everyone. The way you wrote it is exactly how I would expect him to react, honestly, and I loved how sweet he was being with her afterwards. (:

Can't wait for more!!

This is getting real good. Where in TN are you living?

*Sits with a bowl of popcorn and enjoys* O.O
...okay probably the weirdest comment I've ever done, haha

I was VERY happy to see such a long chapter (:
I'm excited to see how Daryl reacts when they get back, but I hope he doesn't get too pissy with Alex about it.

Totally looking forward to Daryl's reaction. Thanks for the long chapter, t'was very good!

So, I absolutely love this story! You're an amazing writer! :)
Daryl and Alex need to hurry up and get together though, it's killing me! xD