Început. - Comments

But why do white people have to bust out the Ouija board? Just kidding. Okay, I see that you updated this some more, and I'm really happy that you did! I love the new layout by the way! Good luck on your contests, also.

Okay, so I noticed a few errors here and there, and that's totally cool. I'm already more in love with this because it kind of reminds me of Wishmaster.

The MC has the right idea, how dare they play with those boards? No good will come from them! I look forward to more updates, and I just noticed I haven't subscribed to this. no wonder I've been missing out on updates.

@ mavis.
Aw thank you I'm so happy you like it. I will go through and fix those when I can, and it means "The beginning"

Let me start by saying, I love the layout. It’s simple which is good and so dark, it fits the story well. I thought the summary was really informative, like if you had of just said “they live in Sighişoara” I would have been pretty confused because I had no idea where that is.

I love the way you described the ocean in the first chapter. I understood the German phrases but I’ve read stories before that incorporate different languages and they didn’t provide any translation at all and it’s so frustrating, so I’m sure other readers will be thankful for your translations in the author’s note. The last chapter left me wanting more, I’m so curious to know what Malphas did to her.

I love stories that involve the supernatural so I’m glad you asked me to read this. There are some spelling and grammar mistakes but apart from that I enjoyed reading this and I’ve recommended it

I just have one question, what does Început mean?

@ SmilingScarlet
Oh yay I'm so glad you like it =D

I am excited for this!