Let Them Heal - Comments

i love this. i love Patrick. Elisa is a raging bitch. this all seems spot on to me. love reading it!

Oh my god, I don't just want more—I NEED more!!! I love their interaction, and I'm really fascinated to see where their relationship is going to go from here. I'm really excited and I REALLY hope you update soon!

@ star collision.
Lol you're forgiven, ma'am! :)) I was worried about the communication rift between the two, but it seems everyone who has commented seems to like the direction it took. It might not be like that ALL the time, but I wanted to try and progress them so the story doesn't go at a snail pace lol. As much as I want to talk about my ideas about how Patrick and his wife conduct themselves through the story, I'm going to hush my mouth haha! I do have some ideas, but I will be doing some practice runs with chapter writing before I feel comfortable enough to add such an element. It won't be pretty, but it won't be so out of place that it comes out from outer space, making the readers wonder what the hell they just read. :) Glad that you got a chance to read it and thank you for the well wishes. I'm doing better, just ridiculously sore from yesterday :)) I'll hopefully get a new chapter up soon! Muah!

I only just saw this had been updated! Forgive me? I think you got the communication thing just right. I'm just worried that Patrick (or Eva?) will get in too deep and something will happen with his wife.... I squealed when he asked for her number, and then again at the end. I hope you're okay, by the way. So so so so so excited to read more!

@ holysmokes13
Oh my, what a coincidence! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far! And thanks for the well wishes. I have a defective heart (murmur) that was fixed about 3 years ago. So with every year, I have to get a check up and see how all those valves and are working and all that jazz. Everything is snazzy, just gotta keep fighting the good fight!

Anwyho, I hope you get going on that fic you mentioned! I would love to see your story develop :) Thanks for commenting and I hope you still stick around on the later chapters! Much love!!

Oh my god I just found this story and I'm sooo stocked! This is amazing, you completely read my mind. I was thinking of a story like 3 days ago, where a doctor would save Patrick's life, and then, you know, all the cliché stuff, because I'm going to study medicine, so this story definitely fullfills all my dreams! Aaaahh, wonderful. Btw I read the last comment, I hope you do good on your, uh, proccess? Idk what it is, but anyway, I hope you made it safe:} I'll be around!

@ Ali Cat
yeah, I have been meaning to get to the point where Patrick has a need to hear her voice. If anything, this is the pivotal and important point to where his greed for wanting to know more keeps growing and growing. He finally hears from her through email, then twitter and now through the phone. Hopefully I can explain what's going on through his point of view come next chapter. So happy that y'all are enjoying this as much as I have writing it. Thank you so much and much love!!

@ Ally Silver
hahahah! I'm so glad you're feeling what Eva is feeling! That is rewarding to read and I love the fact that you're excited about this! I thank you for reading and commenting on the story :) Much love!

@ bobobo
lol I had a friend ask me if it was my intention to be breaking up marriages in my stories or giving marital problems for the world to see haha! I wrestled with the idea of how Eva and Patrick would start off with, but I will say this - Patrick loves his wife and he knows he is a married man. The problem that he has been having lately is her attitude towards his touring and whatever else her bad mood likes to brew about Patrick. He's found a somewhat kindred spirit in Eva, and he is attracted to her physically, so he knows he's in dangerous territory. We'll be exploring that hot mess later in the chapters. I hope you stick around to see what happens between these characters haha! Thank you and much love!

@ chynnablueink
thank you love! I saw Patrick's tweet from yesterday's q&a and the short hair thing came up and I took a screen shot of it haha! I was like, "AHA! HE STILL DIGS THE SHORT HAIR!"

I am so glad that you have been enjoying the story so far. I'm excited since I have so many different twists and turns for them, but I don't want to rush it. I want this to be as real and natural as possible, which was why I was worried about the pace between Patrick and Eva. Glad you like it, though! Thank you again! Muaaahhh!

I honestly thought this was perfect and that you shouldn't change it! I was wondering if he was going to call her on the phone and I can't wait to see what they talk about, oh my god. They're both so adorable and I'm excited for the next chapter because hearing someone's voice you get to bond with them on a whole different level, so I can't wait to read that and read from Patrick's point of view! Good luck in the hospital, I hope everything goes well that that you're well enough to update soon and read all your favorite stories on here!

I love this! I get so excited for her, I geek out like a fan when she does hahaha!! Great writing too!!

Holy crap I would shit myself if Patrick Stump called me. Is it really bad that I'm glad he already had problems with his wife before talking to her? I hope he doesn't do anything stupid! Although that would make an interesting read haha.

I think their communication has progressed perfectly, not too fast at all. Oh my God, I was smiling so big all the way through this!! I am in LOVE with this story! When he saw what she looked like and every time they sent a message I'm just here grinning to myself like a lunatic. You've got Patrick's way of typing DOWN. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

(I remember seeing that interview where Patrick said what he liked in a girl, and then his tweet about liking short hair. Made me want to cut my hair off again. ;))

@ milesandmaisy
Thank you so much! I was hoping that I was able to capture Patrick in a "real world" position rather than the "Fall Out Boy" position with the proper ettiquete and whatnot, so I'm glad it's been enjoyable to read. :) I appreciate your comment and I hope I can keep the story interesting for read! Much love!

Patrick Stump is an angel and you have captured that perfectly. I love this!

@ star collision.
Thank you! I was hoping Eva wouldn't come off as this too perfect of a woman. I tried to make her as real in my eyes as possible and I hope that I was able to present to her in that way. Lol! Patrick is a creeper, right? But lets be honest, Pete helped him in that department :)) I was noticing that the links aren't showing up when you view the story on your phone, but on a computer it will work. Let me find the link and I'll send it to you. I'm sorry that the links aren't working :( I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far :D

Thanks for putting this chapter up! Patrick is such a creep, I love it. Also I fell in love with Eva a little bit - it wasn't even a chapter in her perspective?! I'm guessing the link was to that interview Patrick did about what he looks for in a girl? It didn't show up for me :( I'm really really really love this story. It's just perfect and the relationship isn't forced. Man, Patrick has it bad already!

ATTENTION: I fixed the links in chapter nine's author's notes. There is the Patrick interview about what he looks for in a girl (Soul Punk Patrick!!!!) and the song that is featured in the chapter! Hope y'all get a chance to see them and let me know what you think! Thanks to everyone who has read, commented and SUBSCRIBED! It's crazy cool of you peeps! Much love!

@ falloutlisa
You're very welcome! I just posted the new chapter, but I might have to take a slight pause since real life wants to get in the way and stuff :/ But yay!! Can't wait to see the sequel!! I'll be putting a rec link once I see it live!

@ Marnz
Thank you so much for your comment! I'm really excited to see how things will be developing between Patrick and Eva. But yes... I will be focusing on Patrick and Elisa. There are quite a few turns in future chapters that I have brewing in my wicked brain!