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  • Ali Cat

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    Oh my god, Patrick's email just aghhh. I hope they keep communicating. And I'm not sure what I want to happen with his wife. But I at least hope that Eva and Patrick will become friends through emails, for now at least. Eek I'm legitimately so excited to see where this is going to go!!
    June 6th, 2014 at 04:44am
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    @ star collision.
    I probably would have just stayed away from Twitter for the rest of my life. I don't know what I would have done. Probably fainted and then come back to life, look at my twitter feed, then faint again. haha!

    Only time will tell, little lady. I have a few ideas on the direction I want to go on how they start communicating. :D

    Thanks again, sweetie, for reading and commenting! Patrick loves you for it :))
    June 5th, 2014 at 11:16pm
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    I'd probably go through and delete all of my tweets if Patrick followed me. Gosh, I squealed for Eva when she got the email, and when Patrick followed her. Are they going to start emailing back and forth now?
    June 5th, 2014 at 10:49pm
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    @ star collision.
    LOL yeah that "Fix me in '45" part really came as I was writing. I didn't mean to include a lot of what I was writing until I started talking about his actions and what he was doing while making tea. That came out of no where :)) Pretty nerdy of Patrick, right? So wrong, yet so right! I'm typing out the next chapter, so hopefully I can meet the expectations of everyone for the start of their interaction. *crosses fingers*

    PS - We'll just have to see what the wifey has in store, eh?! ;) (Hell, I don't even know yet, and I'm writing the thing!)
    June 5th, 2014 at 10:16am
  • star collision.

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    Awesome to have a chapter in Patrick's pov. I wonder what's going on with his wife. I get the sense that she may be hiding something. I look forward to seeing Dva respond to the email. Also the 'Fix me in 45' part was so nerdy yet so Patrick. Very Happy
    June 5th, 2014 at 09:37am
  • mswrite85

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    @ Ali Cat
    Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far! I'm also excited by the compliment that was given about how it's a little different than some other Patrick Stump stories. I didn't want to stray too far away from what reality can do, BUT I didn't want to make an AU type of story until I felt comfortable enough with this particular fic. I might transition later into something with a different type of plot of a 'regular joe' Patrick Stump. Thank you again and you'll be seeing an update later this evening! :D
    June 5th, 2014 at 12:33am
  • Ali Cat

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    I'm so excited for this story!! It's so different from any other Patrick story I've read, I'm seriously so excited for this!!! I loved how you wrote Patrick, because that's literally exactly how he acts with his fans and it's adorable. I can't wait until he comes back in the story :D
    June 4th, 2014 at 07:04pm
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    @ star collision.
    Thank you again! I know this chapter was a little bit of filler and not much of Patrick was being mentioned, but the following chapters are going to be crucial to the start of their communication. It'll be a little rocky at first, but I'm hoping I can portray as much of a real Patrick as possible. Whole lotta UPS and down I have planned for these two :))

    Thanks, sweetie, for commenting again! Be on the look out for the next chapter soon (very soon...)
    June 3rd, 2014 at 06:41pm
  • star collision.

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    Yeah, you wrote Patrick really well in that chapter! I'm happy for Eva! So great that's she's getting proper recognition. Please update soon okay?
    June 3rd, 2014 at 05:17pm
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    @star collision
    Ha! I was hoping I would have been able to capture Patrick's way of talking and interaction with the fans. I didn't want to go over the top with Janessa, but I felt that I needed to put something that I thought Patrick would do in this type of situation. Thank you for the comment and I'm hoping you'll enjoy the next installment that's coming soon! :D
    June 3rd, 2014 at 04:20am
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    This is so cute. You got Patrick down to a par. I'm exciited to read more.
    June 2nd, 2014 at 10:52pm
  • mswrite85

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    @falloutlisa - thank you so much for your comment! I'm so glad you're looking forward to this story! I'm excited to see how this turns out, even though I'm writing. Ya never know how things will go and what I'll be thinking of next with these characters. Much love!
    June 1st, 2014 at 10:50pm
  • falloutlisa

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    I love this so far!! Like I said before I'm so excited to read the rest :) great job and keep it up!
    June 1st, 2014 at 09:43pm
  • falloutlisa

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    I love this so far!! Like I said before I'm so excited to read the rest :) great job and keep it up!
    June 1st, 2014 at 09:43pm
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    I love this so far!! Like I said before I'm so excited to read the rest :) great job and keep it up!
    June 1st, 2014 at 09:43pm
  • mswrite85

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    Thanks for the comment! I am a bit nervous for it, just because there are going to be some complicated issues and there are going to confrontations, but I want this specific story to not be as serious as I had previously wanted it to be. I am definitely working on the next chapters, so hopefully I can do this story some justice! :)
    June 1st, 2014 at 09:08pm
  • I_Am_Sherlocked

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    I know it's only the beginning of this story, but it's already looking really promising! The storyline is such a cute idea and I hope you run with this <3
    June 1st, 2014 at 05:53pm