I'M SO ANNOYED MY COMMENTS HAVEN'T GONE THROUGH UGH. I promise I'll go back and comment asap, I'm just frustrated ugh. But yeah. The comment will be twice as long most likely.
@ loveismyweapon. Yeah, I went a little nuts on the updates! Haha, but I hope it made up for my week long absence :D. Yep, things are slightly intensify in the romance department between Eva and Pateick, but there is a hurdle the two have to get over, and that is Eva's past and her mother. Hopefully next week I will have a few chapters up and we'll get to the nutty gritty. It's going to be slightly intense, so fair warning lol. Thank you so much for coming back and keeping up with the story! And YES, I will be having a glorious time tomorrow. It's just making me antsy because they are already in Corpus and exploring the city ( I think... ) and I'm here, an hour away from them :( Oh, the struggle is DEFINITELY real :)) Take care and thanks again! Much love!!
So it took me a really long time to catch up with how much you've updated, but I finally made it! So much has happened! I'm very happy that they talked about where they stand and the situation with Elisa. I can't wait to find out what the deal is with Eva's mother! Have fun seeing FOB! I went to the Camden date and they were truly amazing.
@ Flickering Lights Thanks, hun! I'm glad someone pointed out the little nuance of Eva's mind just because I wanted to bring out more of her conscience and how that tied in with Patrick. She is still self conscious of her body and she has one person to really blame for that. The next chapter will reveal ad to why. Thank you so much for constant support! I appreciate it immensely! Much love!
@ bobobo Yeah, this Mama Bear isn't exactly nice, nor caring, so she's going to be ruffling plenty of feathers come the next chapter. But this will help in Patrick understanding some things about Eva and hopefully help her to forgive and forget. We'll see ;) Much love!
@ Ali Cat lmao! I heart this comment so much! So adorable! But yes, we're FINALLY making some progress, but coming up is a good test for both Eva and Patrick. Her mother being there is going to test Eva's temper and Patrick's will to help her. An emotional ride we will boarding. Hope you bring some happy thoughts you're gonna need them lol Much love and glad to see you back here! :)
@ milesandmaisy thank you! I'm so fucking losing my mind. From what I understand, this is going to be there first time in Corpus, so this should be really interesting to see how not only the crowd reacts to them, but if FOB digs the crowd. Second, I KNNOOOWWWWW. I saw that pic and was like, "Oh my..." LOVED HIS LITTLE MUSCLES. Fucking sexy lol. And yes... As much as I know you and others want some sexy times, we gotta get through some heavy shit first. We'll see how things develop! Much love!
Holy shit. So many good things I'm just sO HAPPY AGH FINALLY THEY'RE LIKE DATING AND I JUST WANT EVA TO BE COMFORTABLE BECAUSE I KNOW HOW IT FEELS WHEN YOU DONT FEEL GOOD ENOUGH AND PATRICK WANTING TO CUDDLE OS WHAT MY BOYFRIEND DOES AND AGH IM IN LOVE WITH THEM I CANT. But. I'm scared of what her mother is doing there
Dis bitch is about to come fuck shit up.I love how you totally made Eva's insecurites realistic. I was like holy shit that's me haha. I feel like that's definitely going to make Patrick building her back up super interesting.
Another amazing chapter :) I like how this one played out. It was good for Patrick to sit Eva down and talk through everything. I like how you sort of went into Eva's mind a little so we could all see how she thinks of herself And I love how Patrick comforted her and and convinced her she's perfect to him. It was just lovely :) also, I'm interested to see what will happen between Eva and her mother. Once again, another amazing cheater lovely and I cannot wait to read more :D x
first of all: have fun at Monumentour!!! soo jealous! it's been over a month since I saw them last and I want to go again :( second: ugh! why did you have to put that picture of Patrick flexing?? that is physically painful to me...finally: LOVED THIS!! but I am - as I'm sure you can guess - super sad there won't be sexy times yet. I know it wouldn't be right yet, but I like naked Patrick scenes ;)
@ mswrite85 Sure thing :D though, I'll probably see your review tomorrow as it is 11:10pm where I am XD But thank you so much for taking your time to do this. Speak to you soon lovely :)
no problem! I was able to get them though, but wanted to contact you through here. I will look over it and send you a review later this evening. I have a class to attend for a couple of hours, so once I am done I'll definitely be reading up on your story! And thanks for the tumblr follow! I don't use it much, unless for story references lol. Talk to you soon!
My messages weren't working for some reason so I replied to this XD
But Aw thank you so much lovely! :D I'm happy that you'll give my fic a look over. http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/562172/I-Will-Make-You-Believe-You-Are-Lovely/ here's a link but I don't know if it'll work but if it doesn't my fic is called
I will make you believe you are lovely
Thank you so much :D and also, with the link of Patrick flexing you posted at the end of that chapter, I followed you on tumblr XD my name is Panic-at-the-drugstore XD Once again, thank you so much xxx
@ TheOnlyBurningCandle haha, yeah! I was on a roll these past nights and wanted to get one more out before the weekend. I am so happy y'all have been happy with their pace and how things are developing. Even though Patrick has confessed to her about his marriage ending and wanting to pursue her, she's hesitating because of the timing. He admitted that he was willing to give the marriage a slight chance, and that upset Eva. Now its more of proving to her that he really does want to be with her and that his feelings for her are growing. So glad people are diggin it!
also, I would LOVE to help you out with your Joe story! I hope I can offer as much advice (useful at that) to help you out! I am flattered and anything to give back, or help, I will do in a heartbeat! Just message me the title of the story and I'll look over it! Thank you so much for sticking around! The least that I can do is keep up quality chapters and help when I can! Much love!
@ ziramrivera18 lol I hear ya! I like to throw in some twist and tunes, and having the freedom that Patrick is feeling at the moment made me think of how he would be as a single man. So by pushing the limits and testing the waters with Eva, he's becoming more and more confident with his actions. All that might be halted due to a dew unfortunate events. We shall see, hmmmm??? Lol! Thank you so much for reading commenting and being patient with me and my updates! I really do like it when I hear feedback and enjoy y'all's words. Much love!
Another chapter?! Wow, I love you! I loved this chapter. I'm glad that Patrick finally explained his situation with Elisa to Eva - even if he was drunk at the time. I'm also enjoying fierce Patrick and I also feel quite bad for Pete but peter will get over it I'm intrigued into seeing what is going to happen in the next chapter. Also, I hate with asking but I've just posted my own fall out boy fanfiction on here (a Joe one because the dude does not get enough love) and I was wondering if you could read over the first chapter and tell me what you think and any improvements I could make as you are such an amazing writer :D if you don't want to you don't have to ^^ But as always, I loved this chapter and I cannot wait for more x
OMG OMG OMG! i love that you do these scene where they're about to then ARGH! But i know the theme of you story isn't centered there but still! Its frustrating and very very good in every way possible. Also that picture of Patrick!! I love that picture too! I wish I'm there (at the states) to see them too, but im here struggling for my exams (UGH!). No worries you're updates always put a smile on my face and make me forget about my stresses for a little bit. :)
Another awesome chapter! I love it when you do double whammys I like the decision you went with this chapter, I enjoyed the conversations and how normal it all felt. I love your writing and always enjoy reading a new chapter :D once again, loved this chapter and I can't wait for more