Falling Out - Comments

absolutely cannot wait for an update on this one! <3

Great chapter!

Wow, this story is incredible it's had me on the verge of tears multiple times I can't wait for an update!

I would love an update!

Holy shit an update! :) this was a very interesting chapter. I would love you to dive deeper into this new Eric character.

For a while there i was a prescription drug user, and i could've easily became Amber. I didn't want to let myself get to that point. I'm glad this story is helping people understand Amber's troubles more, because even though it's fiction this could happen to anyone (except for maybe the rockstar dad thing).

I hope to see you update soon! :)

Awesome update! I wanted to mention that I love how this story has evolved. It doesn't feel like it's trapped within the 'fanfiction' division it started in, and Green Day being involved is more of a background thing, and it's really just about Amber, which is amazing to see! Love how the story is turning out!
21 Guns found it's way into the story haha it's my all-time favorite GD song and also made me finally realize what era this is from, so it puts more things in perspective for me. I love this story so much! Amazing work.

U said to comment if there are grammatical errors on the last chapter. I'd say there is about 10 small errors . Grea to see u updated!

Yo, glad to see the update! I'm happy with it. And thanks for mentioning me in the new chapter, that's awesome! Keep it up!

Yayyyyyyy! I haven't been reading Mibba stories much anymore, but when I got the email saying you updated, I was here! Hahaha.
I forgot how much I love Amber's narration. Her anxiety, and approach to things really makes her seem more like a real person than a piece of fiction. Also! Oh my God! I didn't know how to react to Felicia telling Amber she kissed Tre, definitely a shocker moment in the chapter, where you're like "WHAT? HUH? WHO?" And to be honest, I'm excited to see how that plays out hahaha. Thank you sooo much for the awesome update. I understand what you mean with the whole abusive husband with sister thing, sadly, I had the same issue for the past year with my own sister, and she was in denial for the longest time. Slightly off topic, but yeah! Awesome update! I'm really excited to read what's ahead for Amber.

How come you haven't updated?

I really like this. :)

This one was a lot of fun to read (I think I was smiling all the way through) because right off the first sentence, you feel like Amber has made progress in the fictional time space between this update and last update. She seems so much happier now, and is off to a better start. I know she'll probably still struggle with it a lot, but I'll bet she has a very exciting future in store Great job!

Well done amber, well done!

Well done amber, well done!

Is it weird for me to be attached to a fictional character and feel proud for them? Hahaha, ahh I loved this chapter. Amber seems so much more open and happier now, and it's awesome that Donnovon got to visit her. I'm excited for the next one.

@ WhereMyDemonsHide
I'm so jealous of Cleveland, Ohio. I mean, they got THREE hours of Green Day. Lucky bastards.

And thanks for the comment!

I made a mental note when I saw you'd updated in my email to read it before going on GDC to fangirl about Green Day's HOF induction, I was really excited, too, and somehow didn't remember it until I was looking up stories on here, so I apologize for being late lol.

I like the progress Amber is making, it's a slow progress but that makes it even more realistic instead of her jumping from point A to point B in a matter of days. It feels like Amber is finally getting this all off her chest, makes me happy. update soon! I look forward to it, you're a very talented writer.

Thanks!

Thanks for the super update.