@ WhereMyDemonsHide Awe, thank you so much. Trust me it just gets more intense and squeal worthy. I have a bunch of ideas for this story and many directions I have to consider. Hopefully it won't get too ridiculous. I'm tempted to make like a new layout and everything and start a "sequel" but when I did that with another story of mine I lost readers. But I don't want this to have like 100 chapters. I don't know. It's just something to think about.
That chapter ending has got to be one of my favorites in this entire story I loved how you skipped forward a few weeks and showed how Amber is taking to therapy. Her talk with Billie is so beautiful, awesome and tragic. I think... That I screamed when I saw it'd been updated ha ha. Great job.
I feel so bad for Amber and all she's been through. Hopefully the help will be enough to bring her back :) she's an amazing character, and after being dragged through all of this, she's still pulled through. Fabulous job, looking forward to the next! And I'm probably a bit dewy eyed right now... Lol
Holy shit.... :o You, my friend, are AMAZING at writing these chapters that get the reader so worked up in stress and worry, a sheer andrenaline rush right now just from reading, I am in awe, I wonder what's going to happen next??? Update soon! I'm freaking out (In a good way haha)
Well that was depressing...i gasped at what she said to billie. It just seems so real like u r in her shoes or u r in someone elses just eatching it unfold...i hope she gets rescued or something but it would be weird finding her there naked. I'm at a loss for words...
Well that was depressing...i gasped at what she said to billie. It just seems so real like u r in her shoes or u r in someone elses just eatching it unfold...i hope she gets rescued or something but it would be weird finding her there naked. I'm at a loss for words...
That was shocking! When she had her outburst with Billie and Adrienne, and then Donovan too. I don't know how to express it, but how you've written it, makes it feel so much like something that is real. How Amber has slowly moved deeper into addiction, I hope things turn up for her. Update soon!
Oh man! That's intense. I love this story, and I really liked that you wrote this chapter from Billie's point of view, it shows how everyone else is viewing Amber, not just how she sees herself. Update soon!
Oh man... I honestly can't think up anything else to say. Amber is coming to a point when no one can be near her, including Tre. You make this seem so real! Amazing, can't wait for the next update.