Falling Out - Comments

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@ WhereMyDemonsHide
Awe, thank you so much. Trust me it just gets more intense and squeal worthy. I have a bunch of ideas for this story and many directions I have to consider. Hopefully it won't get too ridiculous. I'm tempted to make like a new layout and everything and start a "sequel" but when I did that with another story of mine I lost readers. But I don't want this to have like 100 chapters. I don't know. It's just something to think about.

Anyway, thanks for reading!

That chapter ending has got to be one of my favorites in this entire story I loved how you skipped forward a few weeks and showed how Amber is taking to therapy. Her talk with Billie is so beautiful, awesome and tragic. I think... That I screamed when I saw it'd been updated ha ha. Great job.

I feel so bad for Amber and all she's been through. Hopefully the help will be enough to bring her back :) she's an amazing character, and after being dragged through all of this, she's still pulled through. Fabulous job, looking forward to the next! And I'm probably a bit dewy eyed right now... Lol

I'm tearing up...

OHHHHHH MYYYYYY GOOOOODDDDDD!!! THAT'S ALL I HAVE TO SAY :O

Holy shit.... :o You, my friend, are AMAZING at writing these chapters that get the reader so worked up in stress and worry, a sheer andrenaline rush right now just from reading, I am in awe, I wonder what's going to happen next??? Update soon! I'm freaking out (In a good way haha)

Well that was depressing...i gasped at what she said to billie. It just seems so real like u r in her shoes or u r in someone elses just eatching it unfold...i hope she gets rescued or something but it would be weird finding her there naked. I'm at a loss for words...

Well that was depressing...i gasped at what she said to billie. It just seems so real like u r in her shoes or u r in someone elses just eatching it unfold...i hope she gets rescued or something but it would be weird finding her there naked. I'm at a loss for words...

Thanks for the comments guys!

That was a fucking amazing chapter! I hope she didn't actually kill herself though :/

That was shocking! When she had her outburst with Billie and Adrienne, and then Donovan too. I don't know how to express it, but how you've written it, makes it feel so much like something that is real. How Amber has slowly moved deeper into addiction, I hope things turn up for her. Update soon!

Oh my gosh, where is Amber headed now? Ugh, I love this story so much, update soon!

Oh lord jesus! What has this girl gotten herself into!?

Dayyyyyyuuuummmmmmmmmm

Oh man! That's intense. I love this story, and I really liked that you wrote this chapter from Billie's point of view, it shows how everyone else is viewing Amber, not just how she sees herself. Update soon!

You guys are awesome! Thank you for reading and commenting!

No tre! Tre come back! NOOOOOOO!

Oh man... I honestly can't think up anything else to say. Amber is coming to a point when no one can be near her, including Tre. You make this seem so real! Amazing, can't wait for the next update.

Great job! The little details hint that her addiction is getting worse and she's at a point where she can't stop. Can't wait to read more! Keep it up