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  • zeldachick14

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    I want to know who burst into her room and asked what she was doing
    February 9th, 2015 at 04:52am
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    Sorry glitch lol
    January 31st, 2015 at 05:37pm
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    Can't wait for anither update, cuz u left a CLIFFHANGER! Anyway i laughed really hard at the part where billie was eating a banana while sitting on the counter! XD
    January 31st, 2015 at 05:35pm
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    Can't wait for anither update, cuz u left a CLIFFHANGER! Anyway i laughed really hard at the part where billie was eating a banana while sitting on the counter! XD
    January 31st, 2015 at 05:35pm
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    Can't wait for anither update, cuz u left a CLIFFHANGER! Anyway i laughed really hard at the part where billie was eating a banana while sitting on the counter! XD
    January 31st, 2015 at 08:45am
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    January 31st, 2015 at 08:44am
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    Can't wait for anither update, cuz u left a CLIFFHANGER! Anyway i laughed really hard at the part where billie was eating a banana while sitting on the counter! XD
    January 31st, 2015 at 08:44am
  • WhereMyDemonsHide

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    Love it! I like how you added the flashback, can't wait to find out what happens next :)
    January 31st, 2015 at 06:31am
  • WhereMyDemonsHide

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    Oh I love how this story is progressing! (Sorry for not commenting the last couple updates, internet wouldn't work) Anyways! I think I'm fangirling.

    I love hoe Felicia is towards meeting Green Day, her reaction to finding out Amber lied is very realistic, in fact all of your characters are amazing!

    Another thing I've noticed, is how you've really evolved this story to be about so much more than just being a Green Day fanfic, where it's all about the band, it's really about a girl, who has a horrible past and has a famous musician for a father. Which I love. it's different, and I'll be honest, Amber is one of my all time favorite fic characters ever, from any story. I just love how she is, even in panic, she is really an amazing character, and I hope you update soon!

    Ps. I'm not sure If I told you this or not, but I love your layout, it's really pretty, and the dusty pinks and greys together almost look hazy, which match the story incredibly. Keep writing, can'r wait to read the next part!
    December 23rd, 2014 at 01:47am
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    Nice long chapter, perfect i chuckled several times during this chapter
    December 20th, 2014 at 04:39am
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    My sympathy for her is huge....
    November 29th, 2014 at 03:40am
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    Donovan is a great guy!
    November 13th, 2014 at 05:49am
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    What has she gotten herself into? Sad
    November 6th, 2014 at 04:37am
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    I like how you've slowly moved into her mutilating addiction, it's realistic, excited for more!
    October 24th, 2014 at 12:31am
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    That poor girl is mutilating herself, i imagined myself in her shoes, but i feel awful for what she has been through. But hey at least her dad is billie joe armstrong!
    October 22nd, 2014 at 01:04am
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    Sorry it took me so long, I love this chapter, Amber is slowly coming out of her shell, update soon! Can't wait for it!
    October 20th, 2014 at 09:37pm
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    Sorry it took me so long, I love this chapter, Amber is slowly coming out of her shell, update soon! Can't wait for it!
    October 20th, 2014 at 09:37pm
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    Update! Update! Update!
    October 20th, 2014 at 02:43am
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    Donovan's eli from degrassi haha!
    October 15th, 2014 at 05:26pm
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    Awesome chapter! Can't wait to read about the barbeque, everything about Amber and her world is so realistic is just feels like you are right there, amazing detail!
    October 10th, 2014 at 07:01pm