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  • WhereMyDemonsHide

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    Donovan is a really cool character already! Hopefully he is in future chapters, I love this one, excited as hell for the next, Update soon!
    October 8th, 2014 at 09:28pm
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    @ WhereMyDemonsHide
    I always enjoy reading your comments because they are so nice! Thank you for your sweet words.
    October 1st, 2014 at 11:32pm
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    There are no words to describe how beautiful this is, when Amber is thinking of her mother, it's almost as if you're right there in the room with her.
    It was cool to see her bonding with Adrienne and Brittany. And that Billie Joe is teaching her guitar, so many nice themes came together into such an impactful chapter, with each one it feels like you know Amber that much bettrt, update soon
    October 1st, 2014 at 04:45pm
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    Beautifully written, the amount of description that you include is amazing!

    Keep it up; always looking forward to the next one!
    September 28th, 2014 at 01:46pm
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    @ WhereMyDemonsHide
    Thank you very much!
    September 28th, 2014 at 04:06am
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    I just love this chapter, there are so many things about this that come together into this big breath of fresh air. Everything about Amber is so realistic, I liked how you describe her and connected with her in your interview. Not many authors for Green Day stories use their own emotions, it definitely makes it that much more realistic. Just looking at the pictures of the condos make you want to go there, excellent work. Looking forward to the next one :)
    September 28th, 2014 at 03:33am
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    @ Batman Forever;
    I agree! And thank you for subscribing!
    September 27th, 2014 at 07:51pm
  • SoWrongItsLottie;

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    This is such a fantastic story, and it's so nice to see more Green Day fans emerging again, it's been so long!

    Keep up the fantastic work, you've already got yourself a new subscriber!
    September 26th, 2014 at 03:59pm
  • WhereMyDemonsHide

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    Excellent chapter, I wonder how Billie's going to handle the interview? Leaves me in suspence every time, I love how you write because of that. Each chapter has it's own unique charm, no matter how dark and brooding or happy, they've all been amazing to read, (Am I even making sense anymore? XD) anyways, I'm excited for the next chapter, update soon.
    September 24th, 2014 at 07:44am
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    @ fairyqueen2799
    Just posted it. I usually post, well try to at least, once a week. That gives me time to edit, write on newer chapters, and is less stressful in my opinion.
    September 24th, 2014 at 06:49am
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    you are so welcome i just wanted to ask when are u going to update your nxt chapter the last one was also my
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    September 24th, 2014 at 01:46am
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    @ fairyqueen2799
    Thank you for your comment. I'm not that great of a writer compared to most writer's on here but thank you for the compliment!
    September 23rd, 2014 at 06:28am
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    i think that you are such an amazing writer i hope that this will not be your only book because u are really good im surprised u havnt got published as like the best selling author
    September 23rd, 2014 at 04:19am
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    @ WhereMyDemonsHide
    Good observation. Maybe that's true, maybe it's not. Thank you for your comment.
    September 19th, 2014 at 10:21pm
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    Maybe Tré will become her best friend and replace all the pain medication. He seems like the best person to talk this stuff with, he can be silly and serious and is all Amber may need at this point. Hope everything gets better soon, loved the chapter, can't wait for the next one!
    September 19th, 2014 at 06:05pm
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    @ WhereMyDemonsHide
    Thank you for your comment!
    September 9th, 2014 at 06:04am
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    I didn't even know how to react to that, it was definitely a plot twist, and the last thing I would have expected. Nice writing! This bit of drama had me even more obsessed, as if that were even possible.
    September 9th, 2014 at 06:01am
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    @ WhereMyDemonsHide
    Thank you!
    August 17th, 2014 at 05:06am
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    Congrats on fanfic of the week! This story definitely deserves the spot
    August 16th, 2014 at 06:44am
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    @ whatername12
    Thank you so much.
    August 15th, 2014 at 07:11am