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  • Ella Joanne

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    Hello, to be honest it made me really sad to stop updating. I originally planned on carrying this one on aswell as doing a non-fanfiction version, but it was just too hard. I love Ronnie to death but like you said, it's hard for people who aren't Ronnie fans to understand. Thank you so much for your support. You're my favourite writer on here so your feedback means the world to me x
    January 13th, 2016 at 08:24pm
  • PoeticMess.

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    Hey, just realized that you're no longer updating this version. I'm sad to see the Ronnie version go. But I've thought of doing the same thing to my Trouble-Maker series to be honest. It's hard to show off Fanfiction when people don't always get it or approve of it. So I understand why you did it. I just haven't been able to bring myself to do it for mine yet.

    I wish you were still writing Ronnie fiction. You were one of my favorites. :)
    January 12th, 2016 at 08:44am
  • BrieInWonderland

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    Please please update soon.
    August 26th, 2015 at 01:45am
  • BrieInWonderland

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    Please please update soon.
    August 26th, 2015 at 01:45am
  • PoeticMess.

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    I really like the fight scene in 33. I thought it was really written well and Ronnie’s protectiveness is spot on when it comes to cuteness. His overprotectiveness is annoying, but it was cute when Dwayne made that comment about sleeping with his girl for retaliation and Ronnie didn’t deny she was his. Aww.

    BUT GIRL IS SO NAIVE COME ON. YOU KNOW WHAT’S GOING ON AND WHY DWAYNE WOULD BE ABLE TO USE YOU AGAIN HIM, NOELLE, STOP BEING DUMB, GIRL.

    & YEAH GO AUDREY GO.

    I like Noelle and all, but I wanna see her be the tough one. Be the one to bring up her feelings around Ronnie. I want her to stick up for herself and actually get her way for once. It’s about time that she challenge him and actually win. Stun him silent, beat his ass, something, just so that she’s not the same heartbroken girl over and over again. I can’t wait for a moment where she’s in charge. For once!
    July 31st, 2015 at 12:32pm
  • Ella Joanne

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    Glad to hear :)

    Wooow, you must have a high pain tolerance. I swear everyone I know takes out their nose piercing after a while. Is there a reason or do they just get boring after a while?
    July 3rd, 2015 at 06:58pm
  • Ella Joanne

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    Glad to hear :)

    Wooow, you must have a high pain tolerance. I swear everyone I know takes out their nose piercing after a while. Is there a reason or do they just get boring after a while?
    July 3rd, 2015 at 06:55pm
  • PoeticMess.

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    Yay! I liked that. :) Can't wait to see what comes next.

    & I have snakebites, my cartilage in my left ear twice, my ear lobes, and had my nose pierced for awhile too. :)
    July 2nd, 2015 at 02:36pm
  • Ella Joanne

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    @ Forgetful-Insomniacs
    I love lip piercings. I personally wouldn't be able to get one though because I constantly chew my lip and I love my food too much, I can't have a piercing that gets in the way of my food haha.
    June 29th, 2015 at 04:11pm
  • Forgetful-Insomniacs

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    I only have my ears pierced buuuut i want my bottom right side of my lip pierced and either a nose piercing or eyebrow piercing
    June 26th, 2015 at 10:45pm
  • Forgetful-Insomniacs

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    I don't know something dramatic
    June 14th, 2015 at 11:28am
  • PoeticMess.

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    All I have to say is BOOOOOOOO RONNIE BOOOOOOO.
    Dude's an ass and I'm ready to see him start liking her. "You can join us"????????? I don't even know what to say right now. He's just a drunk, druggie asshole.

    BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

    Hopefully this progresses soon!
    June 13th, 2015 at 10:18am
  • Ella Joanne

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    @ PoeticMess.
    Haha, in England we have so many. I have 3 English, 2 Maths, 6 Science, 2 Religious Studies, 1 ICT, 1 Media, 1 Child Development, 1 Business studies and 2 Geography. Some people have even more because I dropped some subjects.

    And yeah, I'm kind of torn on how Noelle should act. A part of me thinks she should stand up to Ronnie because she's such a strong assertive character but then I also want to show how she's almost a fool for Ronnie and she just gives in to him because she's basically in love with him.

    Thank you so much and thank you for the feedback as well. Once my exams are over, I'll have loads of time to write because I'll be all done with school thank god. I'll try to update soon.
    May 28th, 2015 at 11:34am
  • PoeticMess.

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    Where the hell do you live / go to school that you have twelve exams? And even more than that. That's insane and I would never do that. Ugh, I'm so sorry for you.

    And alright. This girl is driving me nuts. I would've kicked that boy's but for talking to me like that. Jealousy is so annoying and I can bet it's alienating her friends. I would love to see this scene continued in the next chapter with some actual examples of Ronnie being a jerk or getting to close. I want to see her friends' reactions to his attitude! And her attitude towards him. They have to be noticing how close they are!

    Hope you get through your exams and do well! Then I hope for another chapter!
    May 27th, 2015 at 09:25pm
  • PoeticMess.

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    yayyyyyyyyyy! and boooooooooooo!
    I'm still hanging on over here. Can't wait for him to kiss her or something. He's being such a butt head, skipping school and being a wuss. I want to see their emotionssssssss.
    May 9th, 2015 at 12:00pm
  • PoeticMess.

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    I hate you for leaving it right there. I wanna know Ronnie's reaction!! I know I haven't commented in awhile, but I'm still keeping up! I just want to see their relationship progressssssss!!!!!!!!

    I'll be quietly waiting (;
    April 23rd, 2015 at 10:30pm
  • Ella Joanne

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    Thank you so much chica. All these lovely comments make my day :') x
    April 18th, 2015 at 07:44pm
  • Levitate.

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    I absolutely love this story! I can't wait to read more!
    April 16th, 2015 at 12:54pm
  • Levitate.

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    I absolutely love this story! I can't wait to read more!
    April 16th, 2015 at 12:53pm
  • Forgetful-Insomniacs

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    I've never been to one but I'm sure I'd enjoy it *cries in a corner*
    March 28th, 2015 at 08:18am