November 28th, 2014 at 07:57pm
It's a good thing they talked, but Harry is still heartbroken. I don't like seeing him like that. And I'm sure Paulina doesn't either.
I'm definitely checking out the next part as well of course.
xxx
That final part was so well-written. The moment when Harry walks away was just great. I don't think it could have gone any other way (or maybe it could, but the way it was written just made it seem like it was the obvious way to go).
I'm really excited to see where you'll take us from here!