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  • hiboux

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    Perfect ending for this part of their story!
    That final part was so well-written. The moment when Harry walks away was just great. I don't think it could have gone any other way (or maybe it could, but the way it was written just made it seem like it was the obvious way to go).
    I'm really excited to see where you'll take us from here!
    November 28th, 2014 at 07:57pm
  • heartbreakisforever

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    It's a good thing they talked, but Harry is still heartbroken. I don't like seeing him like that. And I'm sure Paulina doesn't either.
    I'm definitely checking out the next part as well of course.
    xxx
    November 16th, 2014 at 05:46pm
  • Hawkchick85

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    I'm glad that they had a chance to talk but Harry giving up is breaking my heart.... I can't wait to see what you have in store for them. I'm glad that Paulina finally faced up to reality and stopped trying to fool herself into thinking that she was okay. She needs to tell her family about Thea and own up to what happened. I love these two and you are an amazing writer. PMS
    November 15th, 2014 at 02:47am
  • banana sykes.

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    I'm glad that they had a moment of closure. Although Harry royally f'd up by suggesting to get rid of Thea, I think it was selfish of Paulina to not understand that he was grieving as well. I'm glad that Harry waited to get her alone and to scream/cry it out. I'm also glad that they didn't get back together after one conversation, because this is a process and it would take way longer than that for them to even start being civil, but there was a glimmer of hope. When Paulin made the offer for Harry to give everything up and move to the US, it means she could potentially see something. I don't think she would have offered if she didn't think there was at least a 1% chance he would say yes.

    Amazing sequel. I'm super excited for the next installment. I could cling on to these characters forever!
    November 13th, 2014 at 12:36am
  • NauticalMile

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    Ugh so many emotions.Regardless of the heart ache and rollercoaster of feels, you're right, they need the pain to get what they want in the end. You may have written this several times but the one you posted suited the situation. I am awaiting the next bits impatiently because I really want to see how much more Paulina does in her political career. Awesome work you curly headed jerk.
    November 12th, 2014 at 06:12pm
  • lilyofthevalley1800

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    Cannot wait for the next sequel! This is such a beautiful story!
    November 12th, 2014 at 04:30pm
  • lilyofthevalley1800

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    Cannot wait for the next sequel! This is such a beautiful story!
    November 12th, 2014 at 04:29pm
  • yourstruly.

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    My heart can't take much more of these chapters, I swear.
    Let's just all go back to being happy and merry and in love so I don't have to cry every single bloody time you update your (magnificent) story, please.
    On another note, I'm sad about this, but your Jane Austen quote at the end gave me hope, so we'll see where this is going. Cannot wait for the next installments in this brilliant story of yours.
    - Sara
    November 12th, 2014 at 01:52pm
  • waking_dream

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    I can't wait to read the next installment...hopefully it won't be as sad as this one :/
    November 12th, 2014 at 12:49pm
  • abigailaag

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    Closure :0 but a harry and Paulina ever going to get back together is my question
    November 12th, 2014 at 09:13am
  • abigailaag

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    Closure :0 but a harry and Paulina ever going to get back together is my question
    November 12th, 2014 at 09:12am
  • cityrockerfashion6

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    Super excited for the next part. Keep up the great work. <3 Mr. Green
    November 7th, 2014 at 09:53am
  • Hawkchick85

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    I'm glad that Paulina is doing okay, but I think she's using things in her life to ignore what happened. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS
    November 1st, 2014 at 08:47pm
  • heartbreakisforever

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    I'm so happy Paulina is doing better!
    I really liked the chapter, but I was expecting for Harry to show up any minute during the chapter.
    Looking forward to the next one! xox
    October 30th, 2014 at 03:03pm
  • hiboux

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    Thea is so sweet! I love her already. It makes me want to adopt a dog immediately.

    This was a great chapter. It's good to Paulina doing better. And Afie! Aah, I really adore him. I can't wait for him and Olivia to get married and Paulina to be best man. It's going to be amazing!
    And Francis! He's making himself comfortable in her house, and that makes me smile like an idiot. I want to read more about him.

    I can already say that I'll be very happy when you update this, because I must know what will happen now that Harry's arrived. How will she react to him being there?
    October 28th, 2014 at 07:34pm
  • panniponce

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    OMG this chapter asdfghjkl.. soooo good.. Tea, and Alfred and then Francis and I almost forgot Harry and then bammmm... please I beg you updated soon!!!
    October 28th, 2014 at 02:48pm
  • kim wonshik.

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    Please... I beg of thee... post soon. Cheese Twitch
    October 28th, 2014 at 01:08pm
  • NauticalMile

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    Damn it, damn it, damn it. I see what you did here . Gave us all these cute moments and then now you're going to ruin us with feelings. I will prepare myself for the next chapter because i know it'll hit me right in the feels.
    October 27th, 2014 at 07:30pm
  • jerebeth

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    Ahhhhhh!! I'm freaking out! Will she talk to him? She should!! He's lost it missing her!!
    October 27th, 2014 at 12:21pm
  • NauticalMile

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    Mi corazon! It hurts. I can't even with this chapter. Poor ginger. Poor Alistair thinking he's failed Harry made me want to cry. My poor babies. I feel like taking them away from you until you can be nice to them. I want to hug poor Alistair and tell him it wasn't his fault then hug Harry and tell him to nut up. He needs some tough love. Another wonderful update where i felt like crying, congratulations you big jerk now make it better.
    October 5th, 2014 at 07:40pm