Hmm, seems like Harry is really losing it now, what with getting drunk and actually thinking Paulina was having a second daughter. I can't really blame Luis for breaking Harry's nose. If something were to happen to one of my brothers, I'd probably be really protective as well. I might not be able to break someone's nose, but I sure as hell would be able to be a massive bitch :). On the other hand, I don't mind Rafael to be a bit nicer to him. I can't wait to see if Harry really goes down to Harvard and if he does, what'll happen when he sees Paulina. Looking forward to the next chapter! xxx
Well, this was a very heartbreaking chapter, but you're right, the characters have to go through that pain, otherwise it just wouldn't be believable. That dream Harry had about his other life really got me though. It must be horrible to wake up to realize that none of it was real. That said, what I really, really liked was that in the dream, Alistair had stuck with Harry. I just found it very beautiful that this was what happened in Harry's dream. It says so much about the relationship between the two of them. The part when he's making Alistair circle the block and he can't build up the courage to get out of the car is also one of my favorites. I find it very relatable :) This was a great chapter. I wonder how it'll go when he gets to Harvard.
My heart breaks for Harry..... I know how badly Paulina was hurt by everything that happened, but Harry is in a very dangerous place. I love this and I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS
it's been a while since i read this story! really good, hope everything turns around quickly for harry and paulina! hope we get to see her back in london soon and that you update soon :)
Amazing I see why you are showing Harry's side of the story but when will you show Paulina's and her heart ache it's nasty that Harry has to get through this period in time with fucking so many women just cause he can't be with Paulina
I agree with heartbreakisforever I don't think it's really necessary. I'll read it sure, but this is the real story so why not focus on that. Plus it gives you more time to update this one faster so that we know what is going on in their live and when they meet again. You already are doing a lot with all these sequels. Other than that this story is amazing so please update soon :)
There it is! I didn't think you'd be posting a chapter that quickly, but yes! you did. This is starting so well. I'm very excited to read more. Your chapter was brilliant. I was feeling so bad for Harry while reading it. I really wish I could leave a longer comment, but I'm running out of ideas and time. I promise I'll make up for it next time :)
Aw, poor Harry. Going through William and Kate's wedding must have been horrific! Hmm, I don't really know how I feel about that two shot. If you decide to write it, I'll definitely read it, but to me it isn't really necesary. Looking forward to the next chapter! xox
yes pls do the two shot!!!! while i understand, that harry and paulina have to be miserable, before they become happy again, it would be nice, to just forget all this heartbreaking reality for a while to read about them and thea :)) i'm so excited about the sequels!!!!! :)))
That absolutely shattered my heart; And I still can't believe there will be no little Thea in their (and our) lives anymore... I am so glad this is all starting again, I can't wait to see how all of this will end and all the inbetweens.
Poor Harry, he was an idiot but I can't help but feel sorry for him. I would love to read about them actually having Thea, I think that would be awesome. Hope to see another chapter soon
My heart breaks for Harry. He was a HUGE idiot and he treated her so wrong when she told him she was pregnant, but I feel so bad for him. I love these two so much and I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS please you are so awesome!!!