Good Girl - Comments

Yo I like this, seems interesting! Update whenever you can! Also, I'm so sorry for your loss. I lost an uncle to cancer a year ago today :/ your family is in my thoughts and prayers, sincerely.

I'm really sorry for your lose, I hope you are doing much better. I'm glad you're back writing and I love the story so far.

@ January Rose
Thank you so much! I appreciate it. It's been a rough 11 months watching her slip away but she's at peace now. Thanks for reading.

I'm so happy his story is starting up again, I love it! Please keep updating, it's awesome so far!
And I'm sorry to hear about your grandma.

@ ambird96
Thanks! I really appreciate you saying that.

Oh my goodness I just found this story as well and wish you would of continued it! You are an amazing writer also

Why do i like Mr. Dare so much!!

YES MY FRIEND. AWESOME UPDATE. I LOVE IT.

@ Phil'sRoseBrideHina
Hey love! I know this is late but thanks so much for reading and for you wonderful comment.

@ Phil'sRoseBrideHina
Hey love! I know this is late but thanks so much for reading and for you wonderful comment.

@ mollymoshpit;
Hehe. Their chemistry will definitely be intriguing as time goes on. Lots of surprises in store!

@ robs
Thanks pretty! I'm excited to write it.

@ RavenArtist93
Yay! Thanks love! I like adding some comedy in my stories.

@ RavenArtist93
Yay! Thanks love! I like adding some comedy in my stories.

@ bellamy blake
Yay! Thanks so much! I wanted to write something along those lines. Books like The Submissive by Tara Sue Me and the Hacker series by Meredith Wild are some of my biggest inspirations for this. Of course, after my own imagination. ;) Thanks again! Glad you liked it.

Great opening chapter! I thought you did an absolutely amazing job of introducing your main characters, and I'm certainly intrigued as to where things will go between them If I'm being completely honest, I'm getting loads of 50 Shades vibes here, but I love, love, LOVE it! I also found Emma to be incredibly relatable, and the dialogue throughout this chapter was completely and utterly on-point.

This was an awesome update, sweetie!
I absolutely died when Emma walked in and found her roommate "fornicating" on the couch bahahaha.
That was great. xD

I just love the roommate relationship between her and Mikey. It is so adorable! :3

I am really looking forward to the moment where she is literally the "maid" of the Mr. Darke house and I am betting there will be a kink to the whole maid thing ;D

Can't wait! C:

I love Emma and Mikey's friendship, it's so cute!! Genuinely so excited for her to move in with Mr. Darke now hehehehe.

I feel like once she moves in there is going to be a lot of sexual tension. For sure some run ins where they see each other naked. lots of blushing and maybe she'll come out of her shell and start teasing him a bit but what do I know?! Anywho, can't wait for the next chapter!

I know it's been a long time since I've read this. Tbh, I kinda forgot where I was past the first chapter, so I reread the first two chapters and.... hot damn! That sight of Mr. Darke opening the door to greet her. It just made me drool.

This entire chapter was perfect. Now I'm off to read chapter three and I'll be back with a comment for it in about ten or twenty minutes. ^^