Yo I like this, seems interesting! Update whenever you can! Also, I'm so sorry for your loss. I lost an uncle to cancer a year ago today :/ your family is in my thoughts and prayers, sincerely.
December 23rd, 2015 at 11:03am
Good Girl - Comments
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I'm really sorry for your lose, I hope you are doing much better. I'm glad you're back writing and I love the story so far.December 19th, 2015 at 12:38am
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@ January Rose
Thank you so much! I appreciate it. It's been a rough 11 months watching her slip away but she's at peace now. Thanks for reading.December 18th, 2015 at 06:07am -
I'm so happy his story is starting up again, I love it! Please keep updating, it's awesome so far!
And I'm sorry to hear about your grandma.December 18th, 2015 at 06:04am -
@ ambird96
Thanks! I really appreciate you saying that.
July 13th, 2015 at 04:01am -
Oh my goodness I just found this story as well and wish you would of continued it! You are an amazing writer alsoJuly 13th, 2015 at 03:03am
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Why do i like Mr. Dare so much!!March 10th, 2015 at 07:43pm
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YES MY FRIEND. AWESOME UPDATE. I LOVE IT.March 6th, 2015 at 03:05pm
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@ Phil'sRoseBrideHina
Hey love! I know this is late but thanks so much for reading and for you wonderful comment.February 14th, 2015 at 11:29pm -
@ Phil'sRoseBrideHina
Hey love! I know this is late but thanks so much for reading and for you wonderful comment.February 14th, 2015 at 11:29pm -
@ mollymoshpit;
Hehe. Their chemistry will definitely be intriguing as time goes on. Lots of surprises in store!February 14th, 2015 at 11:28pm -
@ robs
Thanks pretty! I'm excited to write it. February 14th, 2015 at 11:27pm -
@ RavenArtist93
Yay! Thanks love!
I like adding some comedy in my stories. February 14th, 2015 at 11:26pm -
@ RavenArtist93
Yay! Thanks love! I like adding some comedy in my stories. February 14th, 2015 at 11:26pm -
@ bellamy blake
Yay! Thanks so much! I wanted to write something along those lines. Books like The Submissive by Tara Sue Me and the Hacker series by Meredith Wild are some of my biggest inspirations for this. Of course, after my own imagination. ;) Thanks again! Glad you liked it. February 14th, 2015 at 11:24pm -
Great opening chapter! I thought you did an absolutely amazing job of introducing your main characters, and I'm certainly intrigued as to where things will go between them
If I'm being completely honest, I'm getting loads of 50 Shades vibes here, but I love, love, LOVE it! I also found Emma to be incredibly relatable, and the dialogue throughout this chapter was completely and utterly on-point. February 14th, 2015 at 10:57pm -
This was an awesome update, sweetie!
I absolutely died when Emma walked in and found her roommate "fornicating" on the couch bahahaha.
That was great. xD
I just love the roommate relationship between her and Mikey. It is so adorable! :3
I am really looking forward to the moment where she is literally the "maid" of the Mr. Darke house and I am betting there will be a kink to the whole maid thing ;D
Can't wait! C:February 13th, 2015 at 04:42am -
I love Emma and Mikey's friendship, it's so cute!! Genuinely so excited for her to move in with Mr. Darke now hehehehe.February 12th, 2015 at 11:26am
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I feel like once she moves in there is going to be a lot of sexual tension. For sure some run ins where they see each other naked. lots of blushing and maybe she'll come out of her shell and start teasing him a bit but what do I know?! Anywho, can't wait for the next chapter!February 12th, 2015 at 12:48am
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I know it's been a long time since I've read this. Tbh, I kinda forgot where I was past the first chapter, so I reread the first two chapters and.... hot damn! That sight of Mr. Darke opening the door to greet her. It just made me drool.
This entire chapter was perfect. Now I'm off to read chapter three and I'll be back with a comment for it in about ten or twenty minutes. ^^January 23rd, 2015 at 09:50pm
