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  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    YEHA!! GO Amanda, and I am so glad that Ebony's not just going to let go. I was really worried that she'd think he didn't want her anymore and that was that. But nooo she's a fighter and that's exactly what she's going to do. Good on ya girlie!! *Does happy dance*
    More soon??
    November 22nd, 2008 at 03:18pm
  • CemeteryGates6661

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    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH you updated!!!!

    EEP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    UPDATE AGAIN like now!!!!

    PLEASE PLEASE I need to know what's Zack's whole take on this situation ahhhhh I can't wait for more!!!
    November 22nd, 2008 at 02:08am
  • Freak Out

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    almost done?
    NOOOOOOO!!!!
    November 22nd, 2008 at 12:34am
  • iraisah

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    haha thanks for telling!
    damn last one NEARLY made me cry this one made me tear up and you said it isn't gonna get any better so i'm expecting full-blown waterworks with the next one!
    myeah so awesomely written and keep going!..please
    November 21st, 2008 at 11:59pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    Uhm...*new reader* why does it have to be downhill from here? I loves this, and I wants them to be happy. Neither one of them can love someone else or do anything else...could someone else turn Ebony? Then she'd be a vampire...and Zack wouldn't be able to hear her heart. And it would make them both happy.
    More soon?? Puhlease?
    November 21st, 2008 at 07:21pm
  • iraisah

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    oh that's kinda depressing... but it's good material, does it end depressing for the next story? how many chapters doe still have with this one? i hope you keep up the updates 'cause damn, you almost made me cry!
    November 19th, 2008 at 01:08pm
  • Freak Out

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    im so fucking excited for the updates
    it seemed like 4evr since u updated
    November 19th, 2008 at 02:02am
  • thevoiceofreason

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    great update!!!!more???
    November 7th, 2008 at 05:44pm
  • DaniSayWhat?

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    awww...we need some happiness! an Ebony and Zack reunion if you will.....

    I'm glad she's better and that he's getting better at controlling himself but it sucks that they still can't be in the sameroom together. i would hate that.
    November 7th, 2008 at 04:06pm
  • PenguinsRme

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    I feel so sad for her
    November 7th, 2008 at 03:07am
  • T-Spaz

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    more please
    this story is the sex
    November 7th, 2008 at 01:52am
  • Freak Out

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    AWWW!
    THATS SO FREAKIN HEARTBREAKING!
    November 7th, 2008 at 01:37am
  • punkstar102

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    update please!!
    November 7th, 2008 at 12:15am
  • SurfSkittles

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    zack had better find his self control pronto! i can't bare to see her in a mess like that =(
    November 7th, 2008 at 12:12am
  • T-Spaz

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    [New Reader & subscriber]

    This story is fucking fantastic! I love the fact that the main charecter is a 'real' girl.

    Love it! more soon?
    November 1st, 2008 at 09:40am
  • tulip;

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    OMG!

    Noooo!

    UPDATE.
    October 30th, 2008 at 09:35pm
  • sadangel10

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    iraisah is rigth they shoud talk in the phone or the computer and iraisah i likw your icon=DDDDD

    anaway this story is very good, i like it a lot!
    but its kinda sad 'cause they can't see each other=((((
    thanks for the updates, i hope you update soon again=DDDD
    October 23rd, 2008 at 09:39pm
  • iraisah

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    erm the whole them not seeing each other is a nice thing for the story line and ebony's inscecurity and stuff is some awesome material but seriously haven't they heard of a phone or even a letter? no offence or anything and the ideas good but it just doesn't realy make sense to me
    October 23rd, 2008 at 06:40pm
  • tulip;

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    Loved it.
    October 23rd, 2008 at 04:13pm
  • DaniSayWhat?

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    that's sad :sad: being kept apart from the one you love...sucks ass, dude
    October 23rd, 2008 at 05:39am
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