You Are The One - Comments

fucking a! awesome babe more now lool

Um yeah hi first time reader right here and let me tell you this is amazing and verry well written! 2day was kinda a sick day 4 me so I read all the chapters at once lol
This is by far one of the best stories on mibba (for me anyways)
P.S. How can she not belive Zack!!! They were so ment to be!!! and he should have stud up for his girlfriend!!!

luvd it!

She's forgetting all the stuff that convinced her in the first place - like knowing about that freak who almost raped her anyways. She shouldn't give up on him so soon, 'cos he can't glue it back together yet. Unless...is this what it takes to make him able to be around her?
More soon?? although...that mean this'll end...*cries*

update soon!

i look forward to this
like, i check my email everyday for it
thats really kinda sad.

this is the only Zacky story I'm reading =[
update soon
I <3 it

Nononononnononon1!!!!!!!!! :O

:(

aww how much a single moment can ruin, huh?
ouch
I hope she doesn't do anything stupid!

He may not have verbally denied it...but surely his actions prove it?! I mean - hell, how many guys (vampires) would chuck shit half way across a field if they werent' pissed off? And if they weren't angry at what was being said? They wouldn't have heard him say "no" anyway - he denied the whole paid thing. That's got to count for something...I just hope Ebony has enough sense to think it through and not loose her self control...
more soon??

Loved it.

oh yeah luv the story update soon okay?

stupid retard vampire!
he really just fucked up.

GAH I Litterally jumped when I saw you updated gah I love love love love love this story!!!

I really hope Zack and Ebony get back together soon he's hurting without here and it makes me want to cry, you arevery good at portraying emotions into writting!!!

Can't wait for more update soon!!!

fuck ..seriously fuck
now ebony has really got a reason to fucking do the drama-thing 'cause seriously!
psh and btw i normaly think that characters should just get over themselves but this one ..is freaking ugly situation pleeeaaaas update sooooooooooooooooon mkay?

aw but dude! she's gotta know thats not the case!!!! what the heck man!?

this story is so good, i can't get enough of it!!!
you're a great author, your writing is so good!!!!
i hope you update the story soon=DDD

I love it :D :mrgreen:

i really love that story.
it makes me happy, it makes me sad, it's amazing.
i really love the emotions and the whole story line. it's sooo great!

war_is_homo:

Uhm...*new reader* why does it have to be downhill from here? I loves this, and I wants them to be happy. Neither one of them can love someone else or do anything else...could someone else turn Ebony? Then she'd be a vampire...and Zack wouldn't be able to hear her heart. And it would make them both happy.
More soon?? Puhlease?

:hug: <--- that's what needs to happen with Zack and Ebony