You Are The One - Comments

This was good till she saved Zaky and then it went all down hill from there. This story focused too much on her weight. And what's funny is that she's not even fat! Lmao a size 12 is maybe thick but fat?? Nooo I only kept reading bc I thought for sure she would get back with Zaky but then she gets shot? Makes no sense. Maybe in the sequel? A lot of over description of things, like for instance, he didn't lock the door when he ran off. Totally unnecessary gibberish lol let's hope the sequel is better

Omg chapter 23 why would you say uncle Bob? Sounds a lil like incest ewww. Too much talking not enough graphics.

Now you know it's normal for schools to have your info right? I thought that was hilarious when you said it was creepy for them to have any info on their students lmao

So I just started this story, I'm assuming Zaky's a mind reader?

Zacky's gonna turn her into a vampire. :D

*does happy dance* FUCKING FINALLY HE'S GOING TO SAVE HER FROM DEATH!!! *wiggles ass in air* YAY!! They're gonna be together forever and ever and ever!! YAY!!!
I cannot wait for the sequel!!

OH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
poor Ebony and Zacky =(
I CANT WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL !! =)

it wouldn't be a very long sequel if she died though would it?
she better live
the Spork would not like that.

And you should fear the spork

i can't believe its ober*cries*o wait there still the sequal*smiles* yay ya
i'm so happy about the sequel!!!!!!!

she died???*gaps*thats terrible!!!!i hope she's not dead or at least shes transfromed into a vampire or a werewold or an angel whatever the point is that i want her to be with zacky=DDDD

you did a great job with this story, i really enjoyed it=DDD

amaaaaaaaaaaazing!

you have to let her live.. please? I love the whole thing and I can't wait for the sequa x

she has to live...

ohnooo
i cant believe that happend!
so sad =(

wait what no?
if she dies and the sequels like him being sad she's dead i will be muchos unhappy.
maybes shes gonna turn all vampy! i hope its that and she doesn't die.

oh my gosh!!!
i hope she doesnt die )= if she does then what the hell?? then again, there wouldnt really be a sequal....
but ive loved the updates (= cant wait for the last one (=

oh.my.god.
if she dies. i will kill myself.
lol.
gooddd this is such an amazing story.
if she lives THERE BETTER BE A SEQUAL!

wow i really wasn't expecting that but i guess you already have this planned and will do something to make it better.
but yo know i kinda like it that you shot her and left us with the cliftfhanger, it makes me more attrected to the story.

anyway great updates, i love your story=DD

you....you....YOU SHOT HER!?!!!!! what?!

how rude

NOOOOOOO
I'll hunt that bastard down and cut him to pieces! urgh
men (some of 'em at least) USELESS! *chuckles*

oh. my. god.
oh my god!
OH MY GOD!

OH. MY. GAWD!!
thats like seriously the only response i can come up with.
ima go cry for ebony now.