I'm already having withdrawal symptoms from this story... just finished the last chapter, the ending was perfect! Just wish I came across it sooner, will definitely be reading your sequel :)
Pleeeeease, you've got to start writing on the sequel as soon as possible. This ending left me a heartache and I can't wait to read what's going to happen when they meet again. I need answers to all the questions in my head!
@ Shi! Thanks for commenting with your little outburst :3 haha
@ DreamsInOblivion Thanks heaps for saying all that. That's exactly what I was hoping this story would read like, because it drives me nuts to see people fall in love after like, a week and 2 conversations. Both in stories and in life lol
You're welcome, that was just my honest assessment haha and I feel that way towards love in real life as well. Also I just edited this comment because I realized my comment posted twice for whatever reason (oops :P).
Gotta say I'm impressed with this. The relationship that developed between her and Gerard was well executed and didn't feel forced at all. Their conversations really made them seem like believable characters and I could picture how feelings would develop into something more. The same cannot be said for MANY other fanfics that just rush into the romance where it seems like the characters have no chemistry and suddenly they are professing their love for each other without any realistic build up so this was a refreshing read. Keep up the good work :)
Oh hell, I don't know what to say about Gerard's stupidity Can't he just see that he's only hurting her more by trying to "protect" her from him? Gerard, dude, just grow a pair and tell her the truth...
Just wanted to say; I seriously love this story thus far. Can't wait for the next chapter, I read 1-19 in one sitting so clearly I am dying for more :)
@ Join the Masquerade I KNOW, RIGHT? I actually managed to ask Gerard for a hug, and he hugged me! I didn't think I was able to walk afterwards...
OH.MY.GOD. Gerard saved her... I was like... almost crying when I read that. I need to know what's going to happen next!! *running to subscribe to the sequel*
And thank you so much for the shout out! I would do the same, but you're like the queen of this, so I'm pretty sure that everybody who reads mine already read yours!
@ BeAZombieLikeMe It's the worst feeling :( Thank you! I wish you the best of luck with meeting him one day
@ Shi! Thank you :) HE JUST SMILES AND STARES MAN. IT'S ALMOST CREEPY. LIKE I'M READY TO GO NOW STOP PEEKING AT MY SOUL AAAH Haha I admire your anger :P
I'm really happy you got to meet Gerard!! I had the chance to meet him too, when he was here in Portugal on the past January 14th! :D
But Gerard on this story.... Damn... I really can't understand him, one minute he's trying to apologize for being an ass, and the next he's snapping at her and telling her that she doesn't need his pity.... I would have punched him for that. On the other hand, I'm happy she and Mikey are spending more time together now. :) Can't wait to see how things will turn out!
Oh my goodness! I was actually expecting that but I actually feel horrible for Gerard, while I'm happy that he actually apologized I can't get over having thought he had put aside the thought of Alison being 'embarrassed' being around him and I felt really bad when it turns out that wasn't the case at all. I know what it's like to be with someone and have them being embarrassed to be seen with you, it's a horrible feeling. So I can really understand how Gerard feels and I honestly hope Alison clears up that misunderstanding! Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next! Oh! And congratulations on meeting Gerard!!!! Man I wish I was so lucky!! <3