The Alexander Swallowtail - Comments

YAAAAAAAY FOR SEQUELS I hope it's not sad the ending I mean

@ TheMagentaColor
Thank you for breaking your silence for a moment :) Lol I'm glad someone squealed I'm not usually good with updates (read: this is the first thing I'm likely to finish in years) but I've got time off till March and am seeing Gerard Way in February and need to get this out before then lol

@ nailsntacks
Thank you so much for that comment :3

@ Alice Manson
You didn't have to give it back but thank you :) I'm glad you got a new reader from it!

IT HAPPENED!!!!!! lol And thank you so much for the shout out!! That's so sweet of you! I'll be absolutely sure to give one back! :)

IT HAPPENED!!!!!! lol And thank you so much for the shout out!! That's so sweet of you! I'll be absolutely sure to give one back! :)

AHHHH... You kill me the way you suspend the story! Come on update super soon. it's worse than Vampire Diaries :)

No seriously, you are a great writer and really capture the main character.

So...I've been subscribed to this for a while, and I've never commented, so I feel bad about that, and it's why I'm here now. :/ ... On another note, I love love love this story sooo much, and literally can't wait for the updates. The relationship between Alison and Gerard is amazing and can I say? I squealed when they kissed. Yes. That happened....And now I'm patiently waiting for the next chapter because I so want to know what happens next! So. Bad. Hope you update soon! (Which you probably will, considering your actually good with updating, unlike how I would be.) .... :D

@ Alice Manson
Lol it would be something I'd think about my boyfriend so it sort of fit :)
Thanks for the comment :)

" if I had to pick a favourite shade of green, I’d find it in his eyes." This line is beautiful! I don't know why but this really stuck out to me! Can't wait to see what happens at the party! I hope she isn't disappointed in him for his drinking/dug habits! lol

@ Alice Manson
Lol don't apologise for something like that Thanks so much :D Means a lot that someone wants to read this haha :)

OH GOSH I love the ending to chapter ten. Like, ITS HAPPENING. lol Sorry, I like to give authors my input after every time I read. x) I love it when my readers do it, and a lot of time it gives the author the motivation to continue, knowing someone cares enough to write about it. WHICH I DO!!! lol

Oh goodness I didn't mean to post it twice. Weird! Sorry!!

THIS IS WONDERFUL!
Your writing is so good! You use phrases that make me actually feel certain ways, you're very good at manipulating an audience. Example; when you were describing Gerard sitting at the desk, studying, you said something about his hair falling in front of his face and something about how moving it would be too much of an interruption. It was oddly beautiful! You have a very smooth and flowy way of writing and I love it! I hope you update soon! Great job <3

Oh come on you can't leave it like that. i demand another chapter. Yes!
You're a really great writer btw.

Wow! I just read this and I love it!!! Please update soon.

@ junebug
Thank you so much :)

I seriously love this story so much, and I love the blossoming relationship between Alison and Gerard its so sweet :)

@ junebug
Thank you so much! :D

Loving the story! Can't wait to read more!

Loving the story! Can't wait to read more!