@ fateisnotafactor Thank you so much for the lovely comment. I worked really hard to make this story strong and realistic, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! If you have any recommendations on good characters or other "how on earth would that work" story ideas, let me know!
This was awesome. I started reading because I was curious about how on earth a Mike Babcock story would work, and I got sucked in right away. I loved how everyone was complicated and a bit contradictory - it felt real. And "brighter since he'd come around" got me good.
@ Thatmom Thank you so much for reading it a second time! What a compliment. I'll have to start writing a new story soon. Let me know if you have any ideas or character requests.
So much information in both chapters. Mike deserved what he got from Sid. Viv has a point about moving past this at sometime!!!! Really glad Sid and Viv are spending so much time together.
You are doing such a great job of writing the dichotomy of people that are essentially good doing bad things. It is so hard not to feel sympathy for Viv even though what she was doing was so wrong - can't wait to see how things develop!