It’s honestly been about a year since I’ve checked this out. I’ve been so busy with school and work that I haven’t had time to read and I finally decided it was time.
Reading this reminded me how much I love your stories. The way you write just captivates me and keeps me wanting to read more. You already know how much I love this story, all versions of it! =P But I really love reading chapters from Zacky’s POV as well. It’s something new and defnitely something that I’ve been wanting for a while now! I’m definitely looking forward to reading more of this story, whether it’s fan fiction or not.
Sorry I’ve been gone for so long, I’ve honestly missed this and you so much! <3
I finally got the chance to catch up. I really hope that you will continue with this. But, I must be honest. I have read the original version of this, & I must say, I feel that your heart isn't much into this rewrite as it was when you first wrote this story. I feel it could be much livelier. I'm not saying this as criticism, more of inspiration. Cause I know the type of writer you are. I know your work & it's fantastic. You have a fantastic story going on here & I extremely hope that you continue with this. I don't come to Mibba often anymore, but I do occasionally, hoping to find amazing stories like this. Please update
Please keep this as a fanfic. I'm loving the fact that you have Zack and Brian as characters and I feel like I can relate to it. I don't mind waiting for updates as long as you keep it like it is now. I personally think it's a great story xxx
I will admit what drew me to this story is Zacky V, but if you no longer want to write fan fiction then don't. Don't torture yourself writing something you're not happy with. I would give the original a shot. You do what makes you happy.
So, I finally decided to read this...and I can't find the words to describe what I'm feeling. All I can say is that I am eagerly waiting for the next chapters...
It has taken me way too long to finally be able to read your updates and comment. I went from feeling so heartbroken for Zacky and angry at his dad in one chapter, to the sadness and cuteness in the next chapter. These emotions, I'm telling you! Loved the updates, as I always do. Can't wait for more <3
When I got to the summary page I was confused that some chapters were gone, but then I skipped down to the A/N and I get it. I did re-read this chapter and I like that it's in third person now. It puts a new spin on the story...if that makes sense? I'm looking forward to reading more!
I'm finally getting to read this after a whole week of it being up! =(
As always, I'm loving it! I was super confused for a bit because I could've sworn I had read all that before and didn't realize the chapter had been rewritten! I can be a little slow sometimes. =P
But I love the changes, and I already told you I love the name change! Still super excited to see where you'll take this story this time around! =D
I love this so much! I didn't read your original story but what you've written so far is pretty awesome as far as I'm concerned. You've got a fan here!
I hope changing her name inspires you and helps your writers block. It really doesn't have to be perfect. Hun I just want you to know that if you don't want to rewrite this you don't have to. You should do rewrite if that's what YOU want to do. Don't let us(your readers) make that choice for you.
As for the rewritten chapter. It is awesome. Its going to be awkward when she sees him at school and realizes he is Brian's friend. But to be honest what was she supose to do. Obvious his father is abusive and an ass. If I saw that in public I wouldn't know what to do.