Sure Thing - Comments

I figured it was time for a long winded comment rather than short and in all caps. but here's some caps: OH MY GOD I LOVE THEM BOTH. literally the sexual tension is great because you can tell they both just want to act on it but they're trying to respect each other.

Ok - these two are just too cute for words. They are not kids - both have been down this road before - but there is a shyness and excitement that is very reminiscent of young love. But they are both worried about making a wrong step. This really means something to both of them.

And now they are already planning "Date 2". Can "Date 3" be far behind?!!

*patiently waits for next update* *grabs popcorn*

@ jfong1130 - You'll see her in a couple chapters!

@ ace merrill. - Haha! I love those gifs! I think Paulie is pretty quiet and low-key. He doesn't get much attention so he's a bit of a blank slate that I can interpret how I want.

@ LoveGame13 - I think you'll have to live with the sexual tension for just a bit longer. There's a few more chapters to go before they get that far. :-)

"Jumping from point A to point D meant that point F was just down the line." - hahaha love it.

I'm also excited for Melanie and Sid to make an appearance! Sid will always be my favorite :)

omfg, chapter 10 got me all like;



That was soooo good. I really enjoyed the chapters you posted today! And I def can't wait for the dates to come, and for Melanie to be mentioned! I'm seriously loving your Paul Martin, I don't know much about him.. so this is good!

Hahahaha. I didn't expect for chapter 11 to end that way.

"[...] I mean, I don’t want you to think that I’m easy." was definitely the line in the recent chapter, and it's was in the chapters description, haha. I love it!

They need to bone already! This tension is just too much! I love them (shocking - I love all your characters, haha). :) yay for 2 chapters in one day. #addicted

@ Death_to_Roses - Thank you! So glad you like it!

@ Thatmom - It was an evil end to the chapter, so I posted then next bit early. :-)

@ soupy - Agreed! She does deserve more than a romp on the floor of her studio. Even if the music hadn't killed the mood, I think Paul would have stopped it.

@ Flyers_girl - You're right; Paul doens't get enough love. He deserves more!

@ mstaffa7 - Yes! She'll be coming up with the next few chapters and does play an important role.

@ alwaysadreamer - LOL. Finally!

This is SUPER good!

Ok maybe I DID scream in frustration!!!!

Wow - so sweet and yet so hot! And as much as Cam wanted things "to progress", she deserves much more than a romp on the floor of her dance studio, for her first time in almost 2 years.

And while parts of him may be saying "No lets go", I am sure in his head, Paul is understanding that Cam is not a "puck bunny" and should be made to feel special.

But given the hormones that were raging, it still took a "change in music" to derail the bullet train that was headed straight to "sexy time" town.

: )

I love the chemistry between them! And Paul Martin certainly doesn't get enough love around here.

Oh what a way to end. Just saw that Melanie Kay is in this story a bit...that was one of my favorites!!!

I love 2 update days...just saying

PRAISE ALL THAT IS GOOD

PRAISE ALL THAT IS GOOD

@ Anya Tepes - I was just teasing all of you to make sure you really wanted Paul to give her a kiss. ;-)

@ bostongirl33 - Yes! That's exactly what I wanted it to be--two adults finding each other and finding love.

@ FLSweet82 - Thank you!

@ Jamie Benn - Thanks! Glad you're loving it!

@ soupy - So glad that I could play a part in your relaxing evening, especially after a shitty week of work. Also thrilled to hear that the music is enhancing the story. It really played a part in inspiring me to write it, so I'm glad that has translated.

@ MITCHEAE - Thank you!

@ MelissaIsAce - Yay! Thanks!

@ mstaffa7 - The picnic is a total dreamboat move. She won't be able to resist him after that. :-)

@ LoveGame13 - Yay! I promise I'll keep the updates coming.

@ ace merrill. - So glad that the layout is better for you and that you liked that first song from the last chapter. Miguel is definitely one of my favs right now so he was featured in several chapters--including a bit later on in the fic.

@ Thatmom - Haha! That's so true. That piece of dialogue really does sum them up.

Finally!!!!!!!

Hooked!! Excited to see how these two progress. I love that they each come with their own insecurities and baggage. Two adults finding each other. *sigh*. <3