Sure Thing - Comments

Hooked!! Excited to see how these two progress. I love that they each come with their own insecurities and baggage. Two adults finding each other. *sigh*

great new chapter!!!

I'm in love with this story. Keep going!

I am infatuated with this story. It's amazing :)

I am infatuated with this story. It's amazing :)

I have had a bitch of a week at work - barely a minute for myself. So it was great when I could finally put my feet up, pour a glass of wine and catch up on this adorkable pair.

I love your writing and the music certainly adds to the story.

Cant wait for the rest of the "date"

great job

my god, i love this story!

How cute...he brought her a little picnic. Good for Paul...way to go after what you want. What woman wouldn't be won over by that!

Enjoying these updates immensely!

Yaaay, they went on a date, and it was super cute too! I was kind of hoping that he'd show up there, AND HE DID!!
I downloaded the first song, I liked it!

And don't worry, the layout is great! I don't have to zoom in anymore to read.

Maybe, sometimes, yes!!! That perfectly translates them:)

@ Thatmom - I really want to write this perfectly wonderful romance in which everyone says exactly what they are thinking. But I think that'd end up being boring, so I tried to make it realistic in that sometimes people leave a lot unsaid between them. And sometimes, like in cases like this, it just heightens the sexual/emotional tension.

@ jfong1130 - I'm with you on the worrying about updates thing. I hesitate to read a fic if it isn't complete because I worry it'll get abandoned. I usually don't post until I've finished the first draft of my fics or at least until I only have a couple chapters left to write. Glad you appreciate that!

@ HawkGurl93 - I'm a boring romance girl, so I love to write interaction between the main characters. Writing them away from each other feels like a chore to me. However, you are totally right; Paul does have a life outside of Cam. And I think you're going to see a few glimpses of that soon. Cam might even be meeting some of Paul's teammates on a couple different occasions.

@ FLSweet82 - Thank you! I'm so glad you're liking it.

@ ace merrill. - Thank you for giving me a heads up on the layout. It looked okay on my screen, but I'm sure it translates differently to different sizes and resolutions. My background is tiling, so I have no idea what's up with that. But as long as it isn't taking away from your reading, then I'm happy.

@ qwertyu123 - Yay! Glad you like the fic!

OMG OMG OMG! The unspoken words between them is so deep!!! Love it:)

I love it, as usual! Also, thank you for how you update! Usually when I'm into a story I have no idea when/if there's a next update and with your stories that's it the case :)

Love this!! Hopefully we get to see Paul interact with his team soon. He has a life outside of cam, so I would love to see how duper and Crosby and those guys notice the change and how you peg their relationship.

Great story so far cant wait for more.

I loved the chapters! Paul is definitely cute, and I love them together and ic an't wait for them to be happy together and adjladla !!! and her not having to worry about much anymore, and then she can finally relax and not be so tired.

And the layout looks good, it's just the background isn't being tiled/repeated, so the pattern is just a big square.

Can't wait for the next update!

@ anogete
lol Nice! I just like the idea of Paul's ...I wouldn't call it insecurity ...just his moment. <3

Really like this story! I'm on my phone and it looks fine!