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  • Daydreamer90

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    Yeeeeees! I'm so happy they're having a baby. I guess the whiskey was for another person? It breaks my heart that Mesa and Phoenix don't talk anymore and I hope that changes, maybe having a little brother/sister helps. And the conversation between John and Mesa was good, short, but good. I hope you don't give up on this story because I love it, everything you write :)
    July 25th, 2015 at 11:13am
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    Phe wanting to see Emily makes me happy. And Mesa being a little turd makes me annoyed. lol. But whatever he's going through, I hope he talks to John about whatever he's feeling and that things will be fine between them.
    July 16th, 2015 at 07:54am
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    still loving this story :D :D
    July 15th, 2015 at 09:57am
  • Hanzukel8123

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    OMG. I just stumbled on this story this morning and read it all in one sitting and I'm OBSESSED. actually, I have been since the first chapter. Then I saw who the author was and it doesn't surprise me because I've always loved your work IG. I had no idea you were working on another mibba story. LOVE IT and super stoked to see what you do with this one ♡♡♡
    June 29th, 2015 at 12:43am
  • lovelikedez

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    Finally reading these chapters I missed and ahh so much going on. I feel bad for Em. It's tough to deal with all that she's been through. I'm glad Phoenix talked things out with John and now hopefully Mesa will understand all that's happened and not be mad.
    June 26th, 2015 at 10:36pm
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    Finally reading these chapters I missed and ahh so much going on. I feel bad for Em. It's tough to deal with all that she's been through. I'm glad Phoenix talked things out with John and now hopefully Mesa will understand all that's happened and not be mad.
    June 26th, 2015 at 10:35pm
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    I hope Mesa handles all of this alright. You're such a schemer. I'm scared for what's to come.
    June 26th, 2015 at 10:00pm
  • IndigoGirl8123

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    @ everdeen
    everyone seems to have jumped aboard that ship apparently aha but really I jut wanted some sort of difference between the two. Mesa is more outgoing and social and Phoenix is just a little more introverted and focused on his passion. I don't know where everyone got the gay thing from aha. But you're right, John and Dakota would be very understanding like that and so would his mom if the boys ever agree to meet her.
    And Mesa is going to be a little bit of a tantrum through his later years, I'll tell you all that much aha.
    Anyways thanks for commenting, I've been missing these long thought out comments!
    ~IG
    June 21st, 2015 at 12:36am
  • everdeen

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    I hope everything is alright with Emily, even though I think it isn't.

    About the "Phoenix being gay" theory: maybe, who knows? I think he being sensitive and not-into-girls-right-now doesn't mean he's gay, it means that he's not comfortable with sexual matters yet and he prefers to focus on his music. As it has been said, just like his dad. Even if he is gay, (of course it's gonna be difficult, but) I think John (and Dakota!) will be able to handle this and help him to accept himself and how to handle the prejudiced people out there.

    Oh Mesa... don't be too harsh on your old man. Being a teenager is a F* mess, I believe he'll eventually get real and listen to John.
    June 20th, 2015 at 06:01pm
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    @ lacemoonz
    Ooh what's your theory on Phoenix? I'm dying to know. It's all about to come undone in the next chapter, I'll tell you that much.
    ~IG
    June 20th, 2015 at 01:07am
  • lacemoonz

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    SO MUCH JUST HAPPENED FUCK. I have a theory about Phoenix. I hope Emily is alright, I'm scared with her past and how she handles things and if she tried something :( Also, I know Mesa is angry but I hope he doesn't hold it against John for too long. I understand why he would be angry/upset/hurt but I hope it passes. I'm itching for the next update already.
    June 19th, 2015 at 06:33pm
  • carpe yolo

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    About halfway through the chapter I was ready to leave an angry comment about how you had completely broken my heart, but then that ending!! SO. GOOD.
    June 13th, 2015 at 12:32am
  • everdeen

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    JESUS MY HEART, I FORGOT THE POWER YOU HAVE TO BRING TEARS TO MY EYES OMG I JUST CAAAANT

    *FEELINGS*
    June 12th, 2015 at 10:29pm
  • lacemoonz

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    I was expecting a cry and I was just about there and then YOU SAVED YHE FUCKINV DAU HOLY SHIT HAPPY TEARS
    June 12th, 2015 at 05:06am
  • everdeen

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    F**k writing a proper comment, I'm going with a gif:
    http://img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20140524205054/disneycreate/images/2/2c/Silently-Fangirling.gif

    PS: I love Jared, always.
    June 12th, 2015 at 12:01am
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    @ carpe yolo
    Funny you should mention that...
    June 11th, 2015 at 01:42pm
  • carpe yolo

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    This story is absolutely adorable!! The way you've written the relationship between John and the twins pulls at my heart strings in literally every chapter. Too cute for words. I think the only way I'd like this story more is if John finally got his act together and married Dakota ;) hahaha, but for real, I love this and can't wait to see what happens next!
    June 11th, 2015 at 10:57am
  • garrettsbutt

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    My fave fic, ever. This is so good. Ah, man.
    June 8th, 2015 at 07:38pm
  • LadyWolverine0421

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    Pleeeeeeaseeeee tell me he's gonna propose soon! They are so perfect together and she is amazing with the boys.
    June 8th, 2015 at 05:43pm
  • lacemoonz

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    This made me smile oh my god. And John freaking out and shit about them not being in some classes together, AWW. Excited to see what's next :)
    June 7th, 2015 at 08:45pm
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