You're My Mission - Comments

I know absolutely nothing about Bucky/The Winter Solider (I'm a little behind with Marvel stuff), but this story makes me super excited. So far I've only read the first chapter, but I fully intend to read it all the way through once I have enough time to sit down and read it.

I like the main character so far, the first chapter is a really good base for her character and I can't wait to see all the development that happens. Since The Winter Solider is basically a new character to me, I feel like you've described him really well so even I felt like I kind of knew him.

You have a really good flow to your chapters and I really enjoy reading it. Can't wait to continue on and see what happens!

I absolutely love the way this story went and how the characters grew, when her and Bucky got all humpy I was like YAY! and they were like little jack rabbits, then Steve and his intrusion. I laughed out loud, literally. I have to say the ending was sad but you in a way followed the comics. Because apparently Steve dies and Bucky takes on his role, thus the star on his metal arm. But it was really sad that Steve had to die :(

Amazing story though :)

I will be checking out your new story soon :)

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that was the last chapter??
steve died..??
and bucky is taking on the shield?
i.. but...

I found this story in on the my mibba page thread and thought; why not try some fan fiction for a change.

This is very well written, I did find it hard to get into the story, yet that could be just me. You have great descriptions without being too descriptive and boring the reader. At the first chapter; I was really wondering who the perspective was from.

Later on I understood it was the spy; I like the double crossing a lot!

maybe I need to understand the fanside of this story more to truly love it like the comments below. I do feel this is a very good story!

I found this story in on the my mibba page thread and thought; why not try some fan fiction for a change.

This is very well written, I did find it hard to get into the story, yet that could be just me. You have great descriptions without being too descriptive and boring the reader. At the first chapter; I was really wondering who the perspective was from.

Later on I understood it was the spy; I like the double crossing a lot!

maybe I need to understand the fanside of this story more to truly love it like the comments below. I do feel this is a very good story!

I absolutely adore this!! I started this last night and didn't sleep until I finished (Needless to say it was a bit of a struggle to stay awake in class) :P I can't wait for the next update, I need to know what's going on with Steve!! Thank you so much for this, I love a good Bucky story :)

so good!! I hope this doesn't end anytime soon!

seriously you're killin' me here!
WHERE THE HELL IS STEVE AND NAT??!!

IF YOU DO WHAT I THINK YOURE GOING TO DO IM GONNA CRY

Hey, I just started this (I'm only a few chapters in and I have to go to bed) but it's so good so far! I was hesitant at first because I originally thought she was Hydra and I wasn't sure how that was going to go down. But I'm glad I stuck around. It's interesting seeing her as a mole and seeing her sympathy toward Bucky, I think he's really going to appreciate that later down the line. I'll finish up the rest of the chapters tomorrow, but good work!

OH MY GODS PLEASE UPDATE SOON! It definitely sounds like she's going to be used as bait or will be the next "winter soldier" project to use against them

gaah!! they let her go inside alone?? damn! I knew something would happen to her.. it was obvious, how the other guards suddenly wasn't coming, the office rooms were empty..
I hope bucky and steve gets inside to save her before she's taken away......

Red Skull is back! I would love to see what they have planned in order to kill him, but then again you could twist it up and have him escape hahaha. I'm excited to see what is coming up next! Also, to see what Bucky has to say on the matter of giving up Steve to him, because I feel like even when Steve got his powers, Bucky still feels like he should protect him, and I still think that now. :)

hahah it started out so hot with the two of them just to turn funny when steve just opened the door.. he really should learn how to knock.. and then.. red-skull?? really?? well damn, I did not see that one coming..!!

I love this update! hahaha. I hope that Clint was true to his words and helped Nat calm down. And hey, I enjoy this twist because in the comics Hawkeye was involved with Black Widow at some point, so you didn't stray too far from any plot really, just the movie plot, which is fine by me! Update soon please!!! :)

“I’m really smitten with you too, doll,” aawe yay!! happy face!! annnnd he likes pretty woman he should watch dirty dancing well.. both he and steve...

*sings*
CLINT AND NATASHA SITTING IN A TREE, K.I.S.S.I.N.G!!
FIRST CAME JENNIFER, AND RUINED THEIR FUN,
THEN CAME STEVE WHO SHAKES HIS HEAD
LAST COMES SAM WHO DOESN'T UNDERSTAND..

Yayyy! Hawkeye! :) I'm excited to see where his addition leads and I hope he kind of helps Natasha see that Bucky and Jennifer really isn't a threat. I also can't wait for them to also put Natasha back in her place. Can't wait for the next update!!! :)

well I think that maybe, hopefully he'll make nat back the f*ck off.. ahahah she really does have a too big problem with jennifer and bucky being together.. she just seems like a jealous b*tch..
sam being supportive and funny is awesome!
and steve being steve.. I can totally see him look ''dangerous'' with a spatula

think that it's great that bucky was the one to answer the question and that they kinda talked back to natasha, she needs to be put in her place