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  • winddancerx17

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    I like the addition of Clint! I feel like since he's the more trusting one who brings in strays he'll be more open minded to Jennifer's and Bucky's situation then bat and help to bring her around. The only thing I'm confused on is his timeline. If you're using the marvel movies as your basis, shouldn't Clint already know of Bucky and Sam because of the whole winter soldier and falcon situation?
    July 19th, 2015 at 06:17am
  • Awkwardly Obscured

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    Hahaha I enjoyed the super soldier serum because lets face it, I would be wondering the same thing in that moment. I think any girl would haha. Overall I loved this chapter! I can't wait for the next one, but I have a feeling Nat will have something to say about all this. :)
    July 17th, 2015 at 06:13pm
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    Bucky shed them, and I began to wonder exactly which muscles had been enhanced by his super soldier serum. Ha Ha I just loved that one!! XD
    hah, I bet that one or two out of three heard her before Bucky tried to keep her somewhat quiet.... Cute
    and his 70 years comment... cheeky and funny..
    Loved the update as usual Mr. Green
    July 14th, 2015 at 02:49pm
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    It's great to see Bucky kind of coming out of his shell. I love when Cap sets out two bottles of whiskey and Bucky doesn't believe it will take a lot for him to even feel a slight buzz. That must suck having to drink so much just to feel a tiny buzz, but awesome all at once because you won't even get a hangover the next day. Love this update! Can't wait for the next! :D
    July 10th, 2015 at 05:08am
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    Just started tthis fiction this morning..I love it!! Cant wait for the next chapter!
    July 5th, 2015 at 09:14pm
  • winddancerx17

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    Haha definitely enjoyed picturing that whole chapter xD please update soon!!
    July 5th, 2015 at 07:03pm
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    I love how everyone reacted to Bucky in Steve's uniform exspecially sense in the comics Bucky becomes captain America for a while. Can't wait for the next update!
    July 5th, 2015 at 06:47pm
  • helena_88

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    hahah aawe I totally loved that chapter!! them having drinks and sharing stories... even bucky being in on it.. and then the Cap outfit.. lmao! I can so see poor Sam in it.. looking like a kid trying on his dads clothes or something.. though he isn't tiny- just not as big as Steve..
    and then bucky.. yeah.. think he would look hot in it.. just think about it- his badboy hair and face matched with the stars and stripes.. YUM! XD
    July 5th, 2015 at 02:45pm
  • Awkwardly Obscured

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    I loved that chapter because the boys would dress up the girls in tight little outfits to do their dirty work hahaha. Though, I knew Nat wouldn't fall down gracefully to Jennifer after she killed the guards because, first of all it's Nat, and second, she could have easily done the same if given the chance. But I can't wait to see what you have in store for when Nat does start to trust Jennifer a little more. Can't wait for the next update! :)
    July 3rd, 2015 at 06:10pm
  • helena_88

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    hahah, nat sheƤs a tough nut to crack XD
    hah, tight and short skirts plus high heels... men... Cute

    well.. i think sam's right about him prob. looking funny in the cap get up.. bucky might actually look good in it.. though not so sure with his arm and all..
    July 1st, 2015 at 06:03pm
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    With Bucky asking Steve for Jennifer makes me realize that their relationship is more than meets the eye. I can see that Bucky is trusting Jennifer more and more. Though I feel bad that Steve was brushed aside and couldn't help Bucky, but I can see were Bucky is coming from with the dream he had and not wanting to tell Captain America what he did while under mind control of Hydra. Love this update! Keep up the great work! :) <3
    June 20th, 2015 at 07:16am
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    aawe you had me kinda torn here.. part of me wanted to comfort bucky- just like she did- but at the same time I wanted to comfort Steve since he's probably a little sad that his former best friend wont talk to him... Cute
    June 18th, 2015 at 11:03pm
  • winddancerx17

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    Fantastic chapter!! I can't wait to read more! Please update soon!
    June 18th, 2015 at 07:01am
  • winddancerx17

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    Fantastic chapter!! I can't wait to read more! Please update soon!
    June 18th, 2015 at 07:01am
  • Awkwardly Obscured

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    I love both of those updates! I like how Natasha is still apprehension about the two and her finding them kiss sure doesn't help either. I also love how their (Bucky and Jennifer) relationship is building with each update! I love that you chose 50 first dates haha. Can't wait for the next update! :)
    June 14th, 2015 at 06:52am
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    Commented the same thing twice by accident. Sorry. Anyway, I'll leave you a message with feedback next time!
    June 10th, 2015 at 02:05pm
  • threadbare

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    Very very well done, this is such a pleasure to read! I'm still getting into it, so I'll get back with more feedback when I've read everything so far, but I couldn't resist telling you what a good job you're doing!
    June 10th, 2015 at 02:05pm
  • gooney2

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    I'm very much living this story so far. I can't wait to see what happens,with their relationship next.
    June 9th, 2015 at 01:50am
  • helena_88

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    oh my gosh that was just way too frickin' sweet!! even though nat came and put a damper on things.. BUT that lead to them falling asleep together so.... *sigh*
    June 8th, 2015 at 09:46am
  • winddancerx17

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    That was an enjoyable chapter! Let's see what it will and will not take for Natasha to trust the two ;D
    June 8th, 2015 at 08:12am