Found Missing - Comments

@ Shi!
I love creating all this mystery! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Haha, that's very true, if fiction was straight forward there would be no point!

Oh man... I have the feeling that one of them killed Martha, but I don't know...
Loved this chapter and I love when things are complicated, if they weren't they would be no fun

Yes!!! I almost screamed when I saw you had updated.
I think Elfie is overthinking her relationship with Gerard, she still thinks and acts as if Martha was still alive. Besides, she was cheating on Gerard, so I don't think Elfie should be all upset for changing her mind about him. People change. Stuff happens.
I really want to know what happened to Martha though.
Loved the update!

Oh God, I loved this chapter! Everything is so sad and exciting at the same time and I loved the ending, specially because they finally kissed! I hope they now find out what really happened to Martha.
Can't wait for the next chapter

So I'm still thinking she didn't commit suicide. Unless she felt guilty for cheating. Maybe the other guy killed her and I haven't ruled out Gerard either. Can't wait for more

Wait, what?! Martha was what?! I know she never really appeared on the story, but she seemed like a nice girl, now I'm not so sure about it...
This is probably going to sound stupid, but I have the feeling that she's not dead. I know they found her body, but that was the first thing that came to my mind when I read the last part...

More, please. ♥

@ Shi!
Hehe, I had fun writing it too I'm looking forward to writing more of it because it's fun to write!

This chapter was amazing!
Things are definitely getting more intense, I read the whole chapter wondering if anything else was going to happen between them, every interaction made me giggle like a little girl!

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

@ ouijagraph
Great! I can't wait to read it.

@ Shi!
Yes! Haha it's kind of like when they're not arguing they don't really know how to act, I guess... I'm glad you're liking it!

I'm gonna post an update tonight, but things are going to get a little more interesting soon

@ Shi!
Yes! Haha it's kind of like when they're not arguing they don't really know how to act, I guess... I'm glad you're liking it!

I'm gonna post an update tonight, but things are going to get a little more interesting soon

Was it just me or that whole situation outside his house felt kinda awkward? It was funny.
I feel like their relationship is starting to develop into something more, but in very small steps. Like, really, tiny, baby steps, which I find interesting.
Loved it!

@ Shi!
Thank you for such a thoughtful comment! Haha, I'm glad you liked that bit ;)

I'm going to try to update soon! I've got some of the other chapters planned out, just messing around with them until I'm happy with them :)
x x x

This was my favorite chapter so far! I like Elfie's personally, I was almost as taken aback as Gerard when she said they had slept together! She's a fun girl to be around.
I also love the fact that they're getting closer, and that he now calls her by her name, but why do I have the feeling that things won't be this perfect for long?

Please update soon! Xoxo

Another amazing update!

I'll definitely go watch that movie, I love sad ones.

@ OctoberSkies
Thank you so much!
I hope the rest of it is as good, let me know how you get on! :)