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  • KitoftheKat

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    this update was fantastic!!!! i absolutely love this story the more you add, the more i fall in love with the plot and characters! keep up the great work!!!
    December 29th, 2017 at 06:21am
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    AHHH YES!!! So happy you updated! I'm getting so antsy to see how they resolve everything between each other! Update soooooon please!
    December 27th, 2017 at 04:22am
  • Rockinace

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    I loved the update. It left me wanting for them to resolve their situation. Please continue!!!
    December 26th, 2017 at 09:25am
  • Rockinace

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    Please update. This is an amazing story and is not at all cheesy.
    December 2nd, 2017 at 08:58am
  • chicagox23

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    please update!!!!!
    July 8th, 2016 at 07:54pm
  • chicagox23

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    I can't wait for an update!! I'm in love with this story!!
    June 6th, 2016 at 12:37am
  • Octavia Blake

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    just read the 1st chapter! and come on beau! lets not with the tough love alright? Murphy totes have a chance!
    May 14th, 2016 at 07:00am
  • KitoftheKat

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    Just read the whole story and WOW. I'm in love! I can't wait to read more soon!!!
    May 13th, 2016 at 06:27am
  • mammu92

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    Oh wow... I feel so bad for Jon ... That must have hurt. I hope Murphy tells him how she really feels soon (at least after the playoffs) .
    May 11th, 2016 at 04:26am
  • LisaNicole89

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    Please continue this!
    March 13th, 2016 at 12:51pm
  • fightingthewolf

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    omg I need more of this story!!! so fantastic.
    March 2nd, 2016 at 08:38pm
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    will jonny just man up already?! subscribed :)
    August 17th, 2015 at 06:50am
  • Shelby71

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    Hawks dynasty is upon us!They're doing amazing
    Anyway I think the time jump was a little weird,in a way it feels like there could've been more development between Murph and Johnny,from this time jump it seems like there wasn't any progress between the two which is sad so boooo to that!lol
    Kaner and Murph was sooo weird but played out exactly like it should've I think!
    Let's hope the ball gets rolling soon,excited for the next update:)
    June 23rd, 2015 at 07:36am
  • charmbaby12

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    i really love this story and i love the character of Murphy. the last chapter was great and i liked that it had more hockey involved in it. keep up the good work
    June 23rd, 2015 at 12:06am
  • magwag

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    I swear, I think every time you post a chapter I go back and read it again as soon as I finish just to make sure I got everything out of it. Awesome job
    June 22nd, 2015 at 09:46pm
  • SayLaVee

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    Loving this story, and everything about this chapter... Jonny needs to buck the hell up! And I could feel the awkward in the kiss with Kaner, lol
    June 22nd, 2015 at 02:48am
  • umngrrl

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    i'm more than a little invested in jonny and murphy getting together...
    June 21st, 2015 at 06:26am
  • Electra Heart

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    I Kinda want Kaner and Murphy to be a thing...question mark? Hahaha really great chapter!
    June 21st, 2015 at 05:01am
  • Electra Heart

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    I Kinda want Kaner and Murphy to be a thing...question mark? Hahaha really great chapter!
    June 21st, 2015 at 05:01am
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    Kaner is hilarious!!!! Love that Jonny stood up for her!!
    June 21st, 2015 at 03:12am
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