Beyond Your Peripheral - Comments

FUCK I FUCKIN LOVE KANER I LOVE THE KISS SOZ JONNY

I love this! I love how differently this is written and I also like the cameos from the pens players :)

Kaner = absolutely freakin adorable. Seriously, that part made my heart gooey. Meanwhile, Toews and Murph are cracking me up. I know they're all serious and ignoring each other and their feelings, but I find them dancing around it so perfect for their personalities.

I think I just read every chapter as fast as humanly possible with only breaks to actually perform my job, because I'm currently working, and to make sure I don't pee myself from laughing so hard. This is way too good.

Typical Murph fashion here.I love that she ended up talking to Beau!It's pretty obvious that she's scared of what could happen and Toews needs to step it up,explain what he wants and not let her shutdown,haha.It seems to fit Murph well that her response to his kiss was to go into flight mode,I hope that doesn't become a reoccurring theme.She puts up her defenses really well,Toews def has his work cut out for him.
Can't wait for more,thanks for updating!

I love this story so much! You're a wonderful writer! Everything is almost poetic in your writing! Would love to write something with you someday:)
Xx

Been off Mibba for a while and every time I try to get into reading a story on here again I can't seem to do it... but this one pulled me right in! Your writing style is such a breath of fresh air, and the story is just straight up amazing! Love it!

Loved the smirking emoji from Seabrook, perfect reaction. With Murph and Jon's personalities, I can't imagine them being up front with each other (which is fine with me, their interactions are so weird they're wonderful). If you're still looking for a beta down the road, I'd be happy to do it!

I adore your writing style! Murphy is a great character to read.

This is such a great story.I literally can't contain my excitement whenever I see there's an update.Murph is great,I believe her character comes across as exactly what a female NHLer would be like.Bravo for that,
I really really hope that this mess gets sorted between Tazer and Murph,I have this doom feeling that the way she reacted to him asking about it being bad if the NHL knew was his way of feeling her out and now it's all fucked
Complete side note I'm a huge Pens fan(Crosby chirping won't bother me haha), and the Bortz and Beau interactions make me really happy!Please update again soon!:)

Love it!

I LOVE THIS AND I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh, no need to stop you, you can keep going to your hearts desire, pretty please... But really, wow, did not see that kiss coming, thoroughly enjoying whatever consuquences it might bring to the story anyway.

I love Murphy!! Pleaseeeee unleash the 10,000 words because I need more! Love this please keep updating!

I love Murphy!! Pleaseeeee unleash the 10,000 words because I need more! Love this please keep updating!

... so you put down your writing, but i literally found this about an hour ago, and read the whole thing.... twice. So if you just want to post like constantly i really wouldn't complain about it... ;)

That was a fun chapter can't wait for more.

OMG!!! I can't imagine what she is going through. This was hilarious !!!!

Mama Toews will be thrilled!!

Short is fine, this was a good chapter to advance the story :-)