Beyond Your Peripheral - Comments

  • jfong1130

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    Glad that you're back! Loved this chapter and can't wait for more.
    May 23rd, 2015 at 01:37pm
  • magwag

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    I love this so far. You have a very unique narrative style, and that's a good thing.
    April 19th, 2015 at 02:52am
  • synonymforsarcasm

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    great job
    April 7th, 2015 at 11:39pm
  • Write.with.Love

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    This development has extinguished some burn from the loss tonight. More please!
    April 6th, 2015 at 07:26am
  • caleb617

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    Like the pace that this is going at. The possibility of a relationship is definitely intriguing. Hope you post more soon, and that you recover from your internal burning (my condolences about Zayn and 1D)!
    March 27th, 2015 at 04:39am
  • caleb617

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    I love the start to this. Their relationship is already developing down a really interesting path, and I'm super eager to find out what'll happen next!
    March 24th, 2015 at 03:53am
  • jfong1130

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    This is the first girl in the NHL story I have liked! Love the Borts cameo and can't wait for the next chapter!
    March 20th, 2015 at 12:58am