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  • Dezi Demize

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    Ha! Marissa just totally outed herself!! I can't wait to read what happens next!!!
    May 16th, 2016 at 05:03am
  • grotesque bones.

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    In a weird, twisted sense, I'm enjoying the two men. For such small roles, you give them a lot of character and that's powerful. Such realism in the way she talks back to him. Such a hard scene to read but I cannot wait for her to turn the situation around.
    May 14th, 2016 at 07:57am
  • pheromone_cvlt

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    I'm so excited for the next update, I'm ready for Marissa to get what's coming to her!
    May 13th, 2016 at 05:56am
  • Dezi Demize

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    Okay wow...did not see that one coming!!!
    May 13th, 2016 at 05:43am
  • grotesque bones.

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    Why did she leave by herself? Despite all that, I'm really glad Dan is a true friend.
    May 12th, 2016 at 07:21pm
  • pheromone_cvlt

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    I always crave an update for this story, its so good!
    May 12th, 2016 at 05:46pm
  • Dezi Demize

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    ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!?!?!?! AGAIN??????
    May 12th, 2016 at 06:48am
  • LipstickLullaby!

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    Ugh Gabe is so complicated, I wish he would just put his feelings aside and just be a friend to Casey, if he really cared about her at all he would do that. Love all the Jeremy moments! Can't wait for more. Smile
    May 10th, 2016 at 02:02am
  • grotesque bones.

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    A month ago, I didn't understand why Casey held out for Gabe, cared about him, and stuck around as his friend. But seeing how I'm in a very similar situation to her now, everything makes sense in a twisted way. I loved the update. I love the tender moments with Jeremy and I cringe at the Gabe moments but I can no longer judge her for the way she sticks around for Gabe. You're writing is so complex it's brilliant.
    May 8th, 2016 at 08:09am
  • Billiehobo

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    Sweet baby Jesus I need an update. I read this entire story in about 3 hours.
    May 8th, 2016 at 07:08am
  • Dezi Demize

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    Whoa! I'm actually surprised that Gabe apologized! He's got a lot of making up to do and hopefully he'll help Casey out with getting rid of Marissa!
    May 6th, 2016 at 08:47am
  • LipstickLullaby!

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    So happy they got some alone time and were able to be cute and affectionate. Can't wait for more !
    May 2nd, 2016 at 07:23am
  • diet soda society

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    I love this! I just started reading, and I can't wait to see what's in store for Jeremy and Casey :) also I hope Marissa knows that payback's a total bitch!
    April 15th, 2016 at 05:53am
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    I love this! I just started reading, and I can't wait to see what's in store for Jeremy and Casey :) also I hope Marissa knows that payback's a total bitch!
    April 15th, 2016 at 05:53am
  • amymariemichelss

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    oops sorry didnt mean that comment below lol i was trying to figure out what song it was!
    April 14th, 2016 at 08:05pm
  • amymariemichelss

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    I don't wanna hurt, there's so much in this world to make me bleed
    April 14th, 2016 at 08:05pm
  • amymariemichelss

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    i love this sooo much. i can't wait for karma to get marissa
    April 14th, 2016 at 08:04pm
  • Dezi Demize

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    So happy that Jeremy and Casey had some alone time! They deserve happiness! <3
    April 14th, 2016 at 09:24am
  • grotesque bones.

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    Hopefully Dan and Shae are not as stupid as Gabe. I thought I commented on the update when I first read it and today I realized that I didn't :(

    Anyways, I love all the emotion poured into each chapter. My heart truly hurts for Casey. I hate the way Marissa spinned it around on her and that Gabe fell for it. Honestly, doesn't surprise me he did but I still hurt for Casey.
    April 13th, 2016 at 04:50pm
  • Dezi Demize

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    Please don't let Marissa's torment drag on any longer...please let the next update be where the truth is exposed and Marissa gets outed?!?!?!
    April 11th, 2016 at 02:25am